On Mon, 2 Sep 1996, Harvey Torrance Griffin wrote:

	I have to say that I like this idea and the kids you've created,
although I am growing suspicious about young Kuonji's parentage.

A little suspicion seems justified to me, particularly as it is strongly 
implied that Ukyou never married.  The main mystery remaining about young 
Kuonji is his<?> gender, but in part 3 he does seem to refer to himself 
as a male...

Curious as to why Ukyou choose now to come back.

	As for the bomb you dropped in part 2, I hope to see the answers 
to two questions: 
1) Did Ranma cooperate?
2) And if so, why? 

Given that Spice, Megumi and Seki all seem about the same age, it would 
be interesting to see what their exact ages are (and how much time
is between them).  A tight grouping could indicate a overly sucessful 
potion (or something similar) while a wider spread would indicate that 
Ranma is not as pure as he usually acts...

And Ranma + Akane seem to have only one child... one would have expected 
more somehow.  Ah well.

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