At 06:12 PM 9/5/96 -0700, you wrote:

At 07:00 AM 9/4/96 -0400, you wrote:

At 01:32 AM 9/4/96 -0500, you wrote:

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universe.  Anyway, at least I didn't make her prostitute as she is in faaaar
too many lemons. 

       What?   Which lemons?

        Well, actually really really bad lemons. (ie Early.) That's kinda
where I got my dislike for bad fics. Nabiki is my favorite Ranma character,
so seeing her go prostitute almost made me go a flaming. Grrr... .Damn
anonymous lemons.

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       Hmmm..I don't see that kinda language with Ranma & Co...perhaps
in Japanese?

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        Well, there is a bit of mild swearing in the Viz subtitled ones.
(Ranma.) And that's about it. Notice the only real ones who swear are Nabiki
and Ranma. I suppose this is sort of a Dark Fic, now that I go over it, but
still isn't so. I really did tone down the swearing and will be posting the
redo tonight. I think it reads a lot better for it personally. The followup
will probably have less/none. I still think what is in the final version fits. 
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