This story is... hard to comment.  Way too much profanity, in my
opinion.  Nabiki's characterization is way out of character.  I remember
her selling picture of Akane in gi to Kunou, but that's it.  Where did
everything else come from?  Who's Hitoshi?  Do you mean Hiroshi?  I
really have to say I didn't like it... too vulgar... to quote Kunou from
your story.
 



Don Wang <dwang@sprynet.com>, Vice President of AFSS, member of RPGA and
COR, Self-appointed Protector/Defender/Guardian of Akane Tendo, a
faithful Square and Ranma 1/2 fan