Okay!  I'm finally some time to look at fanfic.  This one is pretty
interesting, with a real good twist on the usual "Ucchan's Ranma's
good-friend" plot.  It is also interesting to see Tsubasa's entrance,
since he seems to be widely neglected in fanfics.  Not too much else to
say... very original with the ending with Tsubasa at the end, in my
opinion.
 



Don Wang <dwang@sprynet.com>, Vice President of AFSS, member of RPGA and
COR, Self-appointed Protector/Defender/Guardian of Akane Tendo, a
faithful Square and Ranma 1/2 fan