Thank you for you comments.

At 04:45 PM 9/5/96 -0700, you wrote:

You can try to leave out some of the scenes that you haven't written yet. 
Its quite a long story already. 

        I am considering doing this, I was not sure if they needed to be
        there. I am glad you think they are not neccessary.

Besides, you have all the important parts of the fic written already. 
Most of those unwritten scenes seem 
redundant to me. I leave it to you to figure out which ones to drop.
As to Keiichi's air-time. It doesn't really matter, this isn't his story

anyway. 

        OK.

1: I have reference to two musical peices,  the second is Skuld puting a

tape >in her walkman.  

Assuming its the one before she goes to whack Urd, "Flight of the 
Valkyries" would be a good choice

        I am considering it.  


Again, thank you, 

ed
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