At 05:48 PM 9/12/96 -0500, you wrote:

On Thu, 12 Sep 1996, Nightelf wrote:

(takes a moment to compose himself)

Well.  A powerful work.  

Good job.

Thanks :)

P.S.  Don't apologize.  Oftentimes, the best work comes from the worst 
feelings within - anger, sadness, depression.  Writing can have a 
cathartic effect, sending our emotions flying onto the paper or the 
computer screen rather than at someone else.  
   

Well, mostly I was worried cause the middle section felt weak to me...but 
no one else seems to  think this :)
John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D 
Wannabe at U. Kansas         
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"It's good to kill the King."  "I still think the Saxons should have 
put a higher price on our heads.  I'm more valuable than 25 librum."
--Frequent quotes from our PENDRAGON sessions.

        Ahhhh, John........what are you doing?

        - Greg