On Sat, 14 Sep 1996, Mike W. Loader wrote:

   Enjoy. C&C is very, very, very much requested.

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A SPECIAL NOTE TO OUR TEXAN READERS: No part of the state of Texas is
portrayed in this fic. Me no Alamo, guys.
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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*cough,cough*

Do you realize how horrible the sound of a hysterical laugh from a man 
with a cold is?

Overall, it looks good.  The psychiatrist scene seemed rather dull, but 
the other parts were okay.  

BTW, have you considered changing the names in the "non-Texas" scene 
around a bit, to more "familiar" forms (i.e. John-Walt)?   ;)
 

Phone: (hesitantly) Hi...you probably don't remember, but you held 
me prisoner and threatened me with torture unless I became your 
concubine a few weeks back...anyway, what are you doing next 
Saturday?

And I thought I was desperate.  Seriously, if I were seriously getting on 
OOC case here, I don't know of anyone in their right mind who would go 
out with anyone who had done that to them.  A sick, twisted part of me 
(yes, that same sick, twisted part of me that wrote "Black Lemonade" and 
is going to finish "Kurobara" tonight) wants to scream,"GO FOR TSUBASA!!!
IT'LL CUT DOWN ON CLOTHES COSTS!!!"  

(picture of Ukyou-Tsubasa love scene enters Nightelf's mind, causing said 
poor fool to run to the bathroom before tossing his cookies.)

Uh...forget I said that.

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Nicholas Leifker, aka "Nightelf"
nwl9354@tam2000.tamu.edu
"He's so beautiful when he's unconscious."
-Kodachi Kuno, "Kurobara"
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