Hmm, I though the list was set up to respond to the original poster, now?
I guess the reply was set to go to the list.
Anyway, I should have seen this one coming. After all, if we have one
litefic, its only fair that we will have a dark fic to go with it.
Besides, its not like anyone died, or it had a depressing ending. Hardly
qualifies as a darkfic at all. :)
The last scene was fine, imho. I noticed that Papa-san was less embarassed
to discuss certain topics in this part, though. While I think a change like
this is understandable, you might want to throw in a small comment about it.
(Why do I say the change is understandable? If you talk about an embarassing
topic enough, it won't be quite so embarassing anymore.)
One thing though.
a nice, bright girl. She would make a wonderful wife for Ryunosuke. Maybe
Kyu should contact her family and propose a formal engagement. Arranged
marriages always worked out and never gave anyone any trouble.
*heh* If he only knew.