O.K. where to begin, the bisexual part was a little unexpected but 
definitly welcome, I like to be suprised.  I still wonder why you 
chose to make Ranko Princess and Akane Captain of the Guards.  I 
think that with Ranko's fighting ability she would make a better 
Captain, but this is your story not mine.  You're right about the 
point of getting a little away from the Hyrule story, but you can 
only stick so close (Ranma doesn't use a sword), maybe you should 
pull some characters or weapons out of Hyrule or something.  Other 
than that it is coming along great and I can't wait to read the 
rest of it.  Trudge On!!!!


Sean "Trunks" O'Byrne

"It'll never work...never, never, never." The future sensei of the Anything
Goes Martial Arts