Sorry, not too much action in this one.  I promise it will be the
same in part 2.  I'm not fond of in-detail descriptions of the
act - I just say what happens and let the reader figure the rest
out.  

        *DISAPPOINTED LOOK*

        You don't have to do in-detail if you don't want to, but more detail
would certainly be nice....  I go for in-detail, with feelings and
sensations, but NOT overly vulgar.  You've read "Split Personalities", so
you know what I don't like.....

        Overall, good storytelling that pulls the reader along with its
flow....with humor sprinkled liberally throughout the story.  (the old crone
pogoed away on her stick) <= that one I liked.  I liked this story, but it
has NO tearjerker scenes in it!  BOO HOO!  I love reading tearjerkers...so
then I can learn from their mistakes or good points - and "Namida no
Okonomiyaki" is the result.  

        So, Shampoo/Neko/Werecat looks like a human/cat hybrid?  With a tail
too?  I dunno....I sorta prefer au naturelle (ie. Shampoo as she is, human,
w/o clothing preferably).

Part 2 is planned out in general, but not very specific yet.
Suggestions are always appreciated, although not always heeded. 
:)

Have Ranma turn into a girl.  Maybe Shapoo/neko/werecat would think twice
about jumping all over Ranma-chan then....

There is a god-awful bilingual pun in this one, but you have to
know some German to see it.  Apologies to all who do - and you get
five bonus points from me for perceptiveness.

        I missed it.  What is it, o enlightened one?