| Subject: Re: Ahem..too subtle |
| From: Richard Lawson |
| Date: 10/24/1996, 10:54 PM |
| To: gaffney@iconn.net |
| CC: Fanfic Mailing List <fanfic@fanfic.com> |
Reply-to: sterman@sprynet.com |
gaffney@iconn.net wrote:
Guess I'll have to do a revision. Did anyone pick up that Kyoko killed her parents? Hence the washing the hands? Never mind, I'll punch it up.
No need... I got it. The line about, "There wasn't much they could say in the end" was enough for me. This story works because it is so subtle... trying to make things more obvious would spoil it.-- -Richard sterman@sprynet.com My fanfics are at http://home.sprynet.com/sprynet/sterman/fanfic.htm