Subject: Re: Ahem..too subtle
From: Richard Lawson
Date: 10/24/1996, 10:54 PM
To: gaffney@iconn.net
CC: Fanfic Mailing List <fanfic@fanfic.com>
Reply-to:
sterman@sprynet.com

gaffney@iconn.net wrote:

Guess I'll have to do a revision.

Did anyone pick up that Kyoko killed her parents?  Hence the
washing the hands?

Never mind, I'll punch it up.


No need... I got it.  The line about, "There wasn't much they could say
in the end" was enough for me.

This story works because it is so subtle... trying to make things more
obvious would spoil it.