Here is the first part of my first fanfic. I'm sending this again,
since it appears it did not come through last night. I will apreciate
any C&C. I hope you enjoy!
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<The scene opens. We see a nice living room, with four women
surrounding a computer. One, of them, a green-haired girl sits at the
computer, while the other three watch her type.>
Kyone: Well, here it is...A Magic Knight story just like you asked
for! I'm half done with you now!
Hikaru: Not quite, Kyone-chan.
<Kyone starts to sweat.>
Kyone: What's wrong with it? It's a Magic Knight fanfic!
Umi: Its a crossover! And we aren't even in it! Just those stupid
Ranma characters!
Kyone: Yes you're in it! You'd better be careful what you say about
Ranma characters these days. They could end up coming for you.
Fuu: Excuse me, but a cameo is not what we originally requested of you.
Kyone: Oh all right, already. I still think you're worrying about
nothing!
Umi: NOTHING!?!? This is our career you are talking about! We'll get
you for that!
Hikaru & Fu: YEAH!!!
<The scene fades as we see Kyone being attacked by the three Magic
Knights. The last sound we hear are Kyone's pitiful screams as she's
beaten into the ground.>
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Magic Knight Ranma: Part 1
New Magic Knights! What's Wrong with Ranma?
By Magic Knight Kyone
Ranma 1/2 written by Rumiko Takahashi
Magic Knight Rayearth written by CLAMP
All situations in this story are my fault. If you like it, great! If
you hate it, don't bother holding back!
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<Scene opens. We are at the Tokyo tower on one of the observation
decks. It appears to be raining. We focus on two students, Hiroshi and
Daisuke, who are talking to each other.>
Hiroshi: This is great! A day out of school and away from
Hinako-sensei!
Daisuke: Yeah! A whole day we don't have to worry about getting
drained! What about you, Ranma?
<Both of them turn to see Ranma-chan. She appears to be quite upset.>
Ranma-chan: <grumbling> That's fine for you guys, but look at me.
Because of the rain, and the gusts, I'm stuck like this for the rest of
the day! Who's stupid idea was it to visit the Tokyo Tower while it's
raining?
<Hiroshi and Daisuke face fault. When they pick themselves up, both
Akane and Ukyou have walked up.>
Akane: Come on, Ranma! You've got to enjoy this! Especially since
Kunou's not around to hit on us!
Ukyou: Akane has a point, Ranchan. I know that both of you appreciate
that!
Ranma-chan: Well...You do have a point there...
Akane: You see? Other than the rain, this day's perfect! What could
possibly go wrong?
<As Akane finishes chanting the magic word, there is a rumble of ominous
thunder, followed by a bright light filling the air. The weird thing
is, however, is that only six girls can see it. Hikaru, Umi, Fu,
Ranma-chan, Akane and Ukyou all turn towards the light, and see a
beautiful young girl.>
Emeraude: Please Save Our World, Cepherio, Legendary Magic Knights!
<As soon as this is said, Ranma-chan, Akane and Ukyou feel the floor
change, as if it has become a liquid. They attempt to struggle, but the
action is in vain as they are slowly pulled into the floor. The light
and the woman then fade. Hikaru, Umi and Fu all shrug and go about
their lives.>
-=-=-
<The scene: We are in a dark cave. There are two men there. One is a
tall, black-haired man. His hair is quite long and is tied into a pony
tail. He wears black robes, covering his body. The other is an elf,
with white hair, wearing white clothing. They are both looking in a
mirror, staring at the scene from the Tokyo Tower.>
Black-hair: So, the princess has summoned the Magic Knights. What do
you think of them?
Elf: They are no threat, Zagato-sama. They are weak, and have no
training.
Zagato: You are right, of course. However, I think these insects
deserve to be crushed. Let us proceed to the court, Inova.
<Zagato and Inova stride into another chamber. This chamber is just as
dark, but much bigger. It is circular shaped, with a circular waterfall
forming most of the wall.>
Inova: Alcione!
<From behind the waterfall, we hear a voice.>
Alcione: Hai!
Inova: Dispose of the Magic Knights.
<The waterfall parts right in front of where the voice was coming from.
We see a tall black haired woman. She is quite pale, and wears what
looks like a somewhat skimpy one-piece bathing suit, with boots. She
carries a tall staff with a round gem on the end. She also wears a
lens-shaped gem of the same type on her forehead.>
Alcione: Hai!
<Scene fades>
-=-=-
<The scene: We are in the air over a beautiful, but strange world. Far
below us, we look upon a beautiful, calm sea. We also see several
islands, and what appears to be the main continent. The strange thing
is, some of the islands appear to be floating in the air. Suddenly, we
see an SD Ranma-chan, Akane and Ukyou fall past us from above. The
three girls scream as they plummet towards the sea.>
Akane: <angry> Ranma! This has got to be your fault!
Ranma-chan: <angry> My fault?!? This could be someone else trying to
kidnap you, you sexless tomboy!
Akane: <very angry> SEXLESS TOMBOY?!?! <pulls out her mallet and
throw it at Ranma> Ranma no baka!
<Fortunately for Ranma, the mallet misses.>
Ukyou: Would you to calm down! This is not the time to be fighting!
In case you haven't noticed, we're falling to our deaths!
<Suddenly, a flying fish fly's right below them, catching them. While
Akane and Ukyou land on the fish just fine, Ranma-chan hits it head
first, and is knocked out. Akane and Ukyou catch the red-head before
she slides off the fish.>
Ukyou: Wh-where are we? And what the HELL is this thing?
Akane: <nervously> I-I have no idea...To paraphrase a movie, I don't
think were in Japan anymore, Ukyou.
Ukyou: You got that right. Doesn't help us, though.
<Akane points in the direction that the fish is flying.>
Akane: Well, it looks like this --THING-- is taking us towards that
weird floating island over there.
Ukyou: I think you're right. I'd sure like to get some answers soon,
however.
Akane: Me too. I also wish this baka would go ahead and wake up! I'm
getting tired of holding on to him!
Ukyou: You sure about that, Akane? I can hold him, myself, you know!
<Akane blushes, getting irritated. How dare Ukyou talk to her about HER
fian-- Ranma like that?>
Akane: NO THANK YOU! I CAN HANDLE HIM JUST FINE!!!!!
<Finally, the fish reached the island. Akane and Ukyou gently lowered
Ranma-chan to the island, then climbed off the fish themselves. Now
that they were free to move around, they checked on Ranma-chan's
condition. Ranma-chan was moaning, and her eyes were beginning to
flutter...>
Ranma-chan: Where am I?
<Ranma-chan looks up, and her eyes focus on Akane. She turns her head,
and sees Ukyou to her side. Ranma-chan stares at them as if she did not
know them.>
Akane: We don't know, Ranma We suddenly appeared here after that flash
of light.
<Akane then notices the weird look Ranma-chan's giving her.>
Akane: What's wrong, Ranma?
Ranma-chan: I-I don't remember either of you...I don't even know who I
am, except for the name you're calling me.
Akane: Stop joking, Ranma!
Ukyou: I don't think he's kidding, Akane. Ranma, I'm your fiancée,
Kuonji Ukyou.
Akane: I'm Akane Tendo. <adds angrily> Your real fiancée.
<The two glare at each other over Ranma's prone form>
Ranma-chan: Fiancée!?!? I'm a girl! How can I have a fiancée, let
alone two!
<Akane and Ukyou face fault. Just then a voice cries out from the
woods.>
Cleff: SPIRIT BEAST, RECALL!
<As the voice cries out, the beast turns into mist which flies towards
the voice. The source of the voice steps out of the woods. We see
Cleff, who looks like a short, young boy, carrying a staff. The beast
turned mist flies into a gemstone mounted on the end of the staff.>
Ranma-chan: Wh-who are you?
Cleff: I am Guru Cleff. You must be the Magic Knights Emeraude-hime
summoned.
Ukyou: Magic Knights? No, we're just martial artists from Tokyo!
Ranma-chan: Is that where we live? What's it like?
Akane: <hissing> Not now, Ranma!
Ukyou: I'm Ukyou, that's Akane, and that's Ranma.
Cleff: Never the less, you are the Magic Knights. You are the three
summoned to save this world from distruction. You have to stop the High
Priest Zagato, and save Emeraude-hime, whom Zagato has kidnapped!
Akane: And why should we believe you? Your just a little kid!
<Cleff whacks Akane on the head with his staff.>
Cleff: I'm older than you, little girl.
Akane: Who are you calling little, shorty!
<Cleff whacks Akane on the head, again.>
Ranma-chan: This world's in danger? We should help!
Akane & Ukyou: <hissing> SHUT UP, RANMA!
Ukyou: But this isn't our world! We don't belong here!
Cleff: The only way for you to return to your world is to save
Emeraude-hime. There is no other way for you to return.
Ranma-chan: <eagerly> So what do we do?
Cleff: How much magic do you three know?
Ukyou: Magic? What, you mean like sleight of hand and pulling rabbits
out of
a hat?
(*No, the collectible card game!*)
(Shut up... how did you get your hands on my keyboard?)
(*Sorry boss.*)
(Pardon that interruption...)
Akane: And why should we believe a young boy like you, anyway?
<Cleff whacks Akane again.>
Cleff: Would you just wait patiently
Cleff: <thinking> What was Emeraude-hime thinking when she summoned
these three girls? And what's that weird aura around Ranma? Oh well,
it can't be important...
Cleff: I'll take care of that! MAGIC APPEAR!
<Cleff points his staff at the three girls. A near thunder strike of
white light from the heavens envelopes all three girls and a bright
white light streams from it. When the light envelopes them, the aura
changes. One stream turns red as it surrounds Ranma-chan. The second
turns blue, surrounding Akane. The last turns green, and surrounds
Ukyou. As the magic does its work, the girls clothing dissolves and
reforms into three sailor fukus, the same color as the surrounding
aura. Also, they each receive a white shoulder guard on their left
arm, white chest armor, and a white, fingerless glove on their right
hand. On each glove their was a lens-shaped gem that is the same color
as the aura. Their shoes each change into a pair of boots. Ukyou
receives Elf boots, Ranma-chan gets knee-boots and Akane takes hip
boots.>
<Once the light fades away, Ukyou and Akane stare at their new clothes.
They then turn towards Ranma-chan, and their jaws drop!>
Ranma-chan: Sugoi! This is such a cool outfit!
<Very big sweat drops form on Akane and Ukyou's heads.>
Cleff: Come here, Ranma, and kneel before me.
Ranma-chan: Hai!
<Ranma-chan obediently obeys Cleff.>
Akane: <whispering> Ara...Ranma's acting REAL weird...
Ukyou: <whispering> I think he --er-- SHE hit her head a little TOO
hard.
Akane: <whispering> So, what are we gonna do?
Ukyou: <whispering> I have no idea...
Cleff: Close your eyes, Ranma, and focus. Believe in your magic! Feel
your Believing Heart! Do you feel the warmth?
Ranma-chan: <Concentrating.> Yes, I feel it. It warms me. Words are
forming in my mind... What is this?
Cleff: This is your magic. Use it to defend this world, Magic Knight!
Now, Akane--
<Just as Cleff is about to summon Akane, the sounds of a horse galloping
towards them are heard.>
Cleff: Oh, no, this is happening too soon. SPIRIT BEAST, SUMMON!
<Suddenly, the mist streams from Cleff's staff and forms into a beast, a
huge griffin. As soon as it forms, it kneels, as if to allow easy
access to its back.>
Cleff: You must leave, Magic Knights! Take this beast, and go find
Presia and Mokona. Presia shall explain what you must do. Zagato's
minions, are coming. I shall hold them back.
Ranma-chan: But I want to help you!
Cleff: No! You must save Cepherio! If you don't, we all are doomed!
Ranma-chan: But--!
Akane: Lets go, Ranma.
<Akane and Ukyou drag Ranma-chan onto the griffins back. As soon as
they are on, the griffin takes off, flying away from the island. When
they are just a dot in the sky, Alcione arrives.>
Alcione: Where are they, Cleff?
Cleff: You won't catch them You can't defeat me either. Give up,
Alcione.
Alcione: You are right, my teacher, I cannot defeat you. But I can
distract you! SPIRIT BEAST, SUMMON!
<Out of the air, comes what can be best described as a mist version of
the Fenris Wolf. The two headed beast charges at Cleff, giving Alcione
the opportunity to chase the Magic Knight. Cleff annihilates the
monster, but it is too late for him to stop Alcione. The scene then
changes slightly. Up on a cliff above and unnoticed by Cleff, we see
Zagato watching the battle. A small grin appears on his face.>
Cleff: Good luck, Magic Knights.
<Zagato then raises his right hand and points it at Cleff. Cleff hears
the movement and turns.>
Cleff: EH!?!?
<It is too late as Zagato's spell hits Cleff. The cliff Cleff was
standing on crumbles, as Cleff himself turns into a statue. The statue
falls about fifty meters before crashing into the ground. Fortunately,
the statue does not shatter.>
Zagato: You were good, Cleff, but not good enough.
<Scene fades>
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<The scene: We look upon the griffin, flying into the continent as fast
as possible. The girls look behind, wondering what happened to Cleff.>
Ranma-chan: I wish I could have helped.
Akane: I'm sure Master Cleff is just fine. I don't think he's in any
danger from that woman.
Ranma-chan: Maybe, but I would have preferred to help.
Ukyou: Quiet! I think I hear something!
<All three girls listen and soon they all hear it. It is the sound of
hooves approaching. When they turn towards the sound, they see Alcione
approaching from behind on a white horse, defying the laws of physics by
flying towards them. As she approaches, she points her staff at them.>
Alcione: ICE DAGGERS!
<Hundreds of ice shards fly towards them. The griffin desperately
evades them, several times almost dislodging its riders. Alcione does
this a few times, before getting below them. She fires her ice daggers
right in front of the griffin, forcing it to stop. She then pulls her
horse around in front of them. She points her staff at them, ready to
finish them off.>
Alcione: Pleased to meet you, Magic Knight Wannabee's from the other
world. I know we've just met, but I have to kill you now.
Ranma-chan: <Desperate.> Why are you helping Zagato? Don't you know
that without Emeraude-hime, the world will be destroyed?
Alcione: Yes, I know.
Ranma-chan: <thinking> Then why is she doing this? Why don't she try to
stop Zagato?
<Ranma-chan feels fear pass through her. Then something else happens.
She fills confidence. She can't let them be harmed. She could not
stand it if Akane and Ukyou were hurt. They may be crazy, thinking that
they were her fiancées, but they were her friends. She hears the words
in her mind, and she knows what to do. She stands up, calming herself
to prepare for what she needs to do>
Alcione: <mocking> So the little Knight is trying to fight back? How
brave of you.
Ranma-chan: <coolly> Hiryoushotenha revised: BURNING HIRYOUSHOTENHA!
<A Dragon-shaped hurricane of fire flies out from Ranma-chan. It flies
straight towards Alcione, with a cruel expression only a dragon has.
Alcione, suprised, barely manages to teleport away, before the burning
beast destroys her horse. Ranma-chan collapses on the griffin.>
Akane: Ranma--where did that come from?
Ranma-chan: I don't know. I felt like it was magic, but something else
too...
Ukyou: I've never seen a blast comparable, except for Ryoga's Full
Shishihokodan. I'm glad you're on our side.
Ranma-chan: Well, we best find Presia now.
Akane: But we don't even know where she is...
Ranma-chan: I bet birdie knows, don't you?
<The griffin nods its head enthusiastically.>
Ranma-chan: Nice birdie, good birdie... Hey Akane, Ukyou...isn't it a
cute birdie?
<Akane and Ukyou both face fault.>
Akane: Why should we trust that little brat? He might have been lying
to us.
Ukyou: Well, the only way to find out for sure is to find this
Presia. If she's not there, then we know he was lying.
Akane: <angrily> Oh, of course YOU would side with Ranma.
Ukyou: And what's wrong with that?
Ranma-chan: <worriedly> Why are you fighting over me?
Akane & Ukyou: YOU STAY OUT OF THIS RANMA!
<scene fades, with Akane and Ukyou arguing...>
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<The scene: Zagato's viewing room. Again, Zagato and the elf are the
only ones present. They are watching the Magic Knights>
Zagato: So, they do have some power after all...
Elf: What should we do, Zagato-sama?
Zagato: Nothing. They are heading towards the Forest of Silence. They
will not survive the experience. They do our work for us!
<The scene fades with Zagato laughing.>
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End Part One.
I hope you enjoyed this. I can't really think of much to say here, so
I'll keep it short.
If you're curious about why Ranma's acting so strange, don't wory. It
will be explained in the next part. That is, of course, if you did not
figure it out.
I'm trying to keep both the esentials of Rayearth , while putting in a
few Ranma characters into this situation. Ranma, Akane and Ukyou will
be the only Ranma characters in here, (except for a cameo every now and
then by Ryouga :) ). All comments, criticisms and flames are to be
directed at me.
Arigatoo gozaimasu!
--
Magic Knight Kyone Founder: Magic Knights
Unlimited
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