Here is the second part of Bubblegum Collapse.  In case you didn't get
the first part yet, DON'T read this if you have an aversion to dark
fanficiton.  (though the title should give that much away)

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Storyline: 9.  The most dramatic recovery I remember seeing recently.  Part 
one was OK whereas part two is EXCELLENT.  I Like it.  The Knight Sabers are 
now brought back to reality, and we see the first major (MAJOR) emotional 
problem to face the Knight Sabers.

Characterization: 8.7 Again, a dramatic improvement from part 1.  I saw a lot 
more emotion in the characters this time around, and it made the story much 
better.  I hope part three continues and/or improves this.

Grammar 8.7  Again, no special errors detected.  Standard grammar.

Descriptions: 9.3  This is the kind of stuff I like to see.  Everything of 
importance is described well.  I only saw very small areas of the fic where 
the description deteriorated any.

Overall: 8.925 -- Excellent