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Bubblegum Collapse 5/5

Story 9.  The way the Knight Sabers go out is awesome.  I NEVER expected all 
of them to die, somehow that possibility didn't hit me until Nene accessed the 
Satellite controls.

Characterizations 8.9 Excellent. Nothing else is to be said.

Grammar. 8.7 Standard fare, although the climax of the story clouds my view of 
the grammar in every story if it is well written.

Descriptions: 9.  I think you have earned a 9 in this category.  This time the 
battles were near flawless, with the shortness of the battles emphasizing the 
overwhelming forces the Knight Sabers fought against.

Overall 8.9

Series overall: 9.2

Okay, that does it.  Now I will end my reviewing activities tonight.  I have 
my own fic to work on, you know (Been under construction for over 5 months). 
And this was the perfect inspiration to plow ahead with my own work. From the 
Draxon Review Corner, this is Draxon-X, sighing off.

-- Draxon-X