On Sat, 16 Nov 1996, Reid Carson wrote:

        Unfortunately, I didn't seem to do as well in writing something
that worked as both shockfic and serious fic. (It's a dessert topping!
It's a floor wax!) I wanted to present an alternate interpretation of
Cologne, something more in keeping with the later manga than the
arch-villain she becomes in a lot of stories. Give a break to one of the
characters who usually doesn't get one. I failed at that part, since the
visceral reactions seemed to heavily outnumber the sympathetic ones.

It made me gag, BUT I liked it and thought you made it believable.


John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu      bailesu@komodo.hacks.arizona.edu  
http://www.hacks.arizona.edu/~bailesu/falcon.html 

     P-chan ran across the field and hopped into Akane's arms.  She
snuggled her little pet.  "I love you, P-chan, especially with a little
apple in your mouth and that special sauce Ukyou makes."  They cooked
P-chan over an open fire and made special okonomiyaki out of him.  And
all was good.

--Draft of Lemon Sherbet, Episode 12