On Fri, 15 Nov 1996 18:09:22 -0600 (CST) Scott Jamison said:
: A few small revisions...
: WORSE
: by Scott K. Jamison
: (standard disclaimer)
: Chapter Six: In Which Ryouga Explains a Little
: "In my wanderings,looking for a fabled monk who could lift my curse
: of directionlessness, I went to China, and stumbled across a place known as
: Jyuusenkyo, the Valley of Cursed Springs."
Ah, this is better.
: Sleep did not come immediately. I, this body, was in love with
: Ryouga. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
What exactly is the beginning of the sentence supposed to mean?
: And the other major option wasn't really all that appealing
: either. Ranma thought of girls loving that way as weird (probably
: something Genma had taught him early, his father had all sorts of
: opinions that didn't match normal people's, and while she could probably
: overcome that conditioning, her choice of partners would be relatively
: limited.
Uh-huh, it's better with the little explanation, although you
should close that parenthesis sometime. :)
Sebastian