He returned his attention to Akane.  "You stupid jerk, why'd you get in the
way.  You know I've got more energy than you, I would've been able to handle
it better than you!" he shouted as he picked up Akane's limp body again. 
"Akane, stop joking around!  I don't care if you hate
me, but I've learned my lesson.  Just get up!  Please, just get up, I won't
take you for granted anymore," Ranma says as he begins to break down.  There
was still no reaction from Akane.

see I'm not the ONLY one who could see Ranma breaking down in a situation
like this. (Grr at the 2 people who are still niggling me about that scene
in Forgiveness)



This was really good! keep it up... I usually hate Ranma/SM crossovers, but
this one has been pretty funny. ^_^

misachan

"Gee, we're sure lucky all the caves lead here,"
commented Tux.  (Lucky for the writer too!)

snicker.

	"But we still have to find Ukyou!" interrupts Ranma. "She's the most
important thing right now, I don't care what the rest of you do, but I've got
to find her."

Ummmmmmmm.... I know he cares and all... but this is a little TOO sweet.
Think of all the times that Ranma has just left Ukyou to her own fate while
trying to achieve his own aims (I am thinking of Movie 2 at the moment, but
I know there have been other situations....)
I think he could want to go find her gut "She's the most important thing
right now" is a little SERIOUS and I think Akane would have growled at him.



Marisa Price
marisa@gladstone.uoregon.edu
mdp102@york.ac.uk
http://gladstone.uoregon.edu/~marisa/