Hi guys and girls,

I need some help.  After rereading chapter 4 (and reading the few
comments sent to me) I believe that this part needs a serious rewrite.
What I'm asking you very nice FFMLers is should I scrap the entire
chapter or should I save bits and write around them.  I wasn't
comfortable with it when I sent it out and the messages bare me out. 
Any suggestions out there.  I don't want Suteko to seem otaku(?).  The
character is really nothing like little ole me.  She's a fighter and
co-ordinated.  I'm a real passifist and a klutz to boot.  Anything will
be appriecated.  Just send them to lprior@geocities.com

Thanks