On Sun, 1 Dec 1996, The Venkarel wrote:

I think John is running into the same phenomenon with "Tokyo Senshi".

I dunno...90% of my stories get minimal feedback even from my Mailing 
list who volunteered to read and C & C my stories...It's just when I put 
a MASSIVE amount of effort into it that it gets really aggravating :)

        Heh.  You got two raves before you even released it to FFML.
You're getting a bit of discussion on it now.  And I could tell you put 
a massive effort into "Tokyo Senshi" from the excellent meld of the 
Sailor Moon and Arthurian elements.  The story really flowed for me...
even the Norse elements--hey, doesn't Rei have two ravens in Sailor
Moon?

Yeah, well, I think the Raves helped :)

And yes, Rei DOES have the two ravens in Sailor Moon.

    P-chan ran across the field and hopped into Akane's arms.  She
snuggled her little pet.  "I love you, P-chan, especially with a little
apple in your mouth and that special sauce Ukyou makes."  They cooked
P-chan over an open fire and made special okonomiyaki out of him.  And
all was good.

--Draft of Lemon Sherbet, Episode 12

        I recall some spam with this idea on FFML--wyrm 
(Thomas R Jefferys) said:

Hehe.


John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu      bailesu@komodo.hacks.arizona.edu  
http://www.hacks.arizona.edu/~bailesu/falcon.html 

     P-chan ran across the field and hopped into Akane's arms.  She
snuggled her little pet.  "I love you, P-chan, especially with a little
apple in your mouth and that special sauce Ukyou makes."  They cooked
P-chan over an open fire and made special okonomiyaki out of him.  And
all was good.

--Draft of Lemon Sherbet, Episode 12