Well, you know, I think this is one of your lesser works.  That's like
telling Picasso, "I don't like this painting as much as your other
ones."  Still a good story, and it's nice to see your Ranma and Akane
moving more and more towards acceptance and culmination.

Yet, for me at least, it didn't quite have the emotional impact of your
other stories.  Probably because there was no angst or anything, no
point of conflict at all in this story.  I knew going in that "it"
wasn't going to happen, so there was no tension in that regard.

There were also numerous small grammatical and spelling errors.

Anyhoo, nice story and I'm anxious to see the next color.  Will the
color series be ending with their marriage?

-Richard
sterman@sprynet.com

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