At 12:45 12/2/96, bridget ellen engman wrote:

      "Okay, you can stay my iinazuke." She said softly, pulling him
downward. Ranma resisted playfully, then giving in he lay beside her. He
brushed the hair from her eyes and leaned over her, his lips inches from
hers. She reached up and wrapped a hand around the back of his head, and
grabbed his ponytail with the other. She tried to pull him downward, but he
resisted again with a coy smile. She pulled herself upwards to his lips.
They

                       ^^^  not sure if I can picture Ranma being...
coy.  teasing, yes.  Coy?

Well, as often as Ranma ends up in that pond, Zen sees him more as being koi.

There are a few typos I didn't point out, since they're obviously typos,
but not many.  Looking forward to yellow... :)

So is Zen.

Zen the Heretic-