On Wed, 4 Dec 1996 polk_cw@Mercer.PeachNet.EDU wrote:

[Much stuff snipped]

If you are going to write stories get use to criticism.

If you are going to write Email, learn not to copy the entire letter into 
your letter if you're only going to tack on a 1 line comment at the end.

 > 

John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu      bailesu@bbs.arizona.edu  
http://bbs.arizona.edu:1080/~bailesu/falcon.html 

     P-chan ran across the field and hopped into Akane's arms.  She
snuggled her little pet.  "I love you, P-chan, especially with a little
apple in your mouth and that special sauce Ukyou makes."  They cooked
P-chan over an open fire and made special okonomiyaki out of him.  And
all was good.

--Draft of Lemon Sherbet, Episode 12