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From: Jang Choe <yinyang@altered.com>
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
Subject: [FFML] [C&C]Pic's Reviews
Date: Tuesday, December 03, 1996 7:57 PM
since everyone seems to be in favor of postive comments instead of negative
ones. I think I shall do this again. From now on, I'm only going to do the
"Diehard Gamefan's" type of reviews.
MERMAID'S SCALES
by Chris Schumacher
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 8 only Mermaid's fanfic I've seen, so it's great! If you want a
big change from Ranma fics(not that saying they're bad or anything) try
this! Another masterpiece by Chris Schumacher.
*Characters: 8 Incredible characterzation! Chris's style of dialouge is
always impeccable.
*Overall: 8 Short, but very good. one of the best fanfics I ever read. If
you liked the Mermaid's series, you must check this out!
TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES PT8
by Mckinly Morganfield (Jeff)
*Grammar: 9
*Story: 8 This is the most orginal story I have ever read! Nothing comes
short of perfection in this fic.
*Characters: 8
*Humour: 8
*Overall: 8 I like this story! Very different! Jeff's stuff is always
good to read, no matter what mood you're on.
THY INWARD LOVE PTS 7-10
by Richard Lawson
*Grammar: 8
*Story: 8
*Characters: 9 Great development
*Drama: 7
*Overall: 9 It's not like Lawson needs another ego boost, but here it is.
It's great, TIL was the third that actually made me want to read more,
and
luckily, there are more to read. The entire story was great. If you want
to learn how to write, go read Lawson's stories! Lawson is one(not the only
mind you) of the true writers out in this ffml land.
PROJECT S-BOY PTS 4-6
by David K. Outram
*Grammar: 7
*Story: 8
*Character
*Special Fun factor: 90000
*Overall: 8 You must get this if you like Project A-ko. I mean this thing
was so fun to read, I almost sang in happyness. This IS the crossover with
American comics and Japanese Manga. You have to read it if you like both
mediums. I can't wait till you write more, David.
LESSON IN LOVE PTS 1-2
by Marisa Price
*Grammar: 9
*Story: 7 This is one of the best of 1996.
*Characters: 8 Wow, the characters are so realistcaly protrayed!
*Overall: 8 This is the landmark of all the fics. This belongs on the
pedastal with "Putting Your Heart in the Right Place" and "The Dark Half"
This is one of those fics that will be looked upon for inspiration when a
begginer wants to write a Ranma/Akane romance. Great story. You got to read
this if you think love never works out. Read it, you won't be sorry.
FURINKAN SUMMER 4
by John Biles
*Grammar: 8
*Story: 9
*Characters: 8
*Humor: 10000000000000000000
*Overall: 9 Biles always amazes me everytime he clicks those fingers on
the keyboard. This guy is the master of Ranma fics. This guy is just, I
don't know, the greatest person in the world, we should bronze his hands
when he dies. This fic is just incredible that I don't know how to describe
my feeling. Incredible work, the best. You got to read it. Let us all bow
down before him.
There, I hope everyone is happy. Now, please hold on while I go cry in the
corner.
There, next time I will re-review Don Wang's excellent crossover: Chrono
Trigger and Ranma 1/2. I mean, Don is the god of squaresoft fanfics. Heck,
he even beats Nick Margos because he gives us the best of the two worlds,
Ranma AND Chrono Trigger! Everybody should be happy!
Then, I'm going to review one of my favorites: "Pilaf and the Brain."
-incrediblely funny stuff.
Also, a special contribute to Lizsue's "Childhood's End." - best darkfic
ever.
P.S. you guys better be fucking pissed cuz I did this.
I can't beleive it, people giving C&C to C&C's instead of giving them to
stories. The question is why in the world didn't anyone tell me that they
didn't like what I was doing when I started doing this a year ago?
I will read all flames.
but
I will destory anything that tells me how to C&C. If you know how it's
done, go C&C 10 fics a month. I don't care about how little time you have.
Just do it.
Thanks for giving me the fuel to restart this bad reputation of ffml. Now
everyone is going to be disgusted and leave.
And it's all my fault.
Sorry WWolf, do what you will.
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"They love least that they know their love, which I would have contrive
I,
I follow my love, into the depths of hell itseeeelf!" - Kuno Tatewaki
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