I liked it.  Nothing to say, other than that it was a very nice, low-key
story.  Great
style, especially for your first fic.  *Really* looking forward to seeing
more of you're going to write.  Elements may have been a little tired, but
it's easily forgivable with the cool XMas theme ^_^.

While I'm at it, can somebody please send me the Self-Insertion gone wrong
fic?  
I have been hiding for several days.  Thanks,

Jeff
-jdrutsch@ucdavis.edu, auto-forwarding to a temporary account for the
holidays.