Well, so far, so good, I'd say.  I'd like to see more of this.

OTOH, you may want to flesh out the fight scenes a little more.  How about
showing the sparring match betwee Ranma and Akane in some more detail?  And
some fleshing out of the fight between Ranma and Cologne (it seemed to go by
too quickly to me.)

Keep up the good work.

James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
     ---I can't wait to see what Nabiki does to Shampoo and Cologne.  Her
revenge idea could possibly be more frightening than Ranma's; It could be
almost anything, and with her connections she could make their life a living
hell. ^_^