I doubt that this message will get to the real author of this thing 
(that address looks suspect at best), so I'm forced to go public with 
this one.

    First off, I was quite taken aback by the deaths of the beloved 
Knight Sabers at the hands of a dozen or so Boomers. The deaths described 
are gruesome, gory, and shocking in nature, leaving little to the 
imagination. I winced about seven or eight times just reading this fic. 
Even a non-BGC-otaku like me was appalled at their murder.

    However, the story itself was written quite well, with vivid and 
highly descriptive language that I would not expect in a fic of this 
genre (shockfic et al). The terse, fragmented sentences describing the 
scene after the fateful battle nicely characterize the feelings and moods 
permeating the setting. The final scene between Linna and Nene was 
touching and poignant, giving character to two of my favorite (and often 
most-overlooked) BGC characters. 

    As I read the ending of the story, though, I couldn't help but think 
that the deaths of the KS were pointless and completely uncalled for. If 
the author was trying to make a grand statement with their deaths, I 
missed it completely. The last paragraph, which was obviously supposed to 
be a clever reference to something else, went completely over my head. 
Could anyone enlighten me as to what the company GENOM merged with was 
supposed to be? 

    In short, a good shortfic that I wish I hadn't read. I'm depressed 
now. :(

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Raphael See