At 08:45 AM 19/02/97 +0200, Aivars Liepa wrote:

Greetings.

Hi there.

	Lurker mode off.

	Well, for once it was the funniest Ranma fanfiction, i have read.
All the mixed curses, and of course, the lemmings.  =;-0 

Thanks, both for the compliment and for commenting in the first place.

	As for some thoughts. 
	Ukyou called Akane to spar, but he had fight Panda seconds before.
Dont he need some, even slightest pause?

Well, I didn't really count the bit with the panda as a fight, just
Ukyou banging him over the head once with a spatula. She was new to the
place, she wanted to do something familiar, and she had just spotted
the dojo, so she asked Akane. Perhaps I'll try to explain those motives
when I rewrite Chapter 2.

	And second - Genma rushing after cat-Ranma after hearing him taken 
to bath by Ukyou. If he thought Ukyou was boy, and Ranma was boy, 
why to worry about that curse rewealing - he had revealed his own curse.

Genma wasn't worried about a boy-boy thing, he's just got some problems
with the way the curse is affecting Ranma. I'll develop this as I write
more of the story. Besides, as far as Genma knows, Ranma's psychotic as 
a cat, after all, he always attacks his father when he's a feline(at 
least he did the three times he's been in that form in the story so far).

Bye.

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Mark Doherty  -  mdoherty@mailbox.uq.edu.au

"Kawaii must die."

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