On Thu, 20 Feb 1997, H. Torrance Griffin wrote:

	Minor (actually Fairly Major) Nit: Ranma's curse only turns him
into a female version of himself, if Kuno somehow gained it he would end
up looking like Ko-chan (not a bad thing actually, but any resemblance to
Osage no Onna would be a product of his deluded mind)

	Actually, Akane mentions this in part one.  The answer is that 
Kunou didn't get the generic Drowned Girl curse, he specifically got 
*Ranma's* female form as part of the transferrance.

	 <suddenly double takes at story> 
	 You didn't... > 	<re-reads and allows actual plot to sink in>
	You _DID_! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

	Did *what*?  I know I did a number of things, but which one set 
you off?

	As for the end, it proves you to be an utter Sadist.  Even if
Tatewaki deserved Mikado (which (s)he does not), how could you subject
Kodachi to such a fate!?!

	Well, they're not married yet :-)

SKJAM!