On Fri, 21 Feb 1997, Jang Won Choe wrote:

what's obvious. Also, don't do this either:

(previous scene: some guy comes in pissed off)


"Boy am I pissed!" he said happily.


. .  .

that's not correct! Don't give adverbs/adj/and verbs that contridict what
the characters are feeling or thinking!

I take it you didn't know that 'pissed' is sometimes used for 'very
drunk'. A 'pissed' person could very well be *quite* happy. The point is
valid, your example could be improved.

One other thing - spelleing and punctuation count. ;-)

 "Use the spell checker, Luke." 

-- 
Benjamin Franz