After I recovered from the chills I received from reading the story, I
decided to make a few comments....

1.	You sure come up with some scarry ideas....and go through with 	them!

Sure, why not?  If the idea's there...run with it.

2.	Since you're brave enough to tread watters where others dare not
	travel (except in revenge and parody), I say continue it!  	(Though you
may have to brave your way through a few flames...)

<looks at you with innocent eyes>  What's a Flame?  <back to normal> 
Seriously, though.  I consider any feedback that isn't useless a 
valid comment, and sometimes the useless ones too.  I (try to) reply 
to all comments on my stories, so there's no problems...for me.

3.	You have definately earned my respect for trying to do a serious 
attempt at such a story...

Thank-you.  I like having _someone's_ respect.  It makes me 
feel...good.  I think you know what I mean. (BTW, when _are_ you 
going to continue with MKRanma?)

4.	The only thing that scares me more is wondering what sort of 	story
you will start next!  :)

Only God has an Idea, and he's not entirely sure, either!

Good story.  Just EXTREMELY scarry!

Good commentry, just extremely misspelled...:)

               Shadow Dancer
          (AKA Lord of the Dance)
             (AKA Colin Hidson)
       (Writer of Alternate Landings)
          (Writer of Ranma-Psion)
                    of
       Black Lightning Design Group
 http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/6418
        danceshadows@geocities.com
           cshadow@hotmail.com
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       Personal Saying:
When one plus one exceeds the normal answer of two,
Take a pill, start running, and call me in the
morning.
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     Joke of the day:
What does a five hundred kilogram talking rat say?

Here, kitty, kitty, kitty...
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Personal Motto:
If the Idea's there, and the Imagination's fresh,
Take the Idea, and run with it.
You never know where it will take you until you go
along with it.
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      Stress Relief
   All stressed out?  Sometimes it helps to think
of happy scenes.  Maybe a pastoral field, a field
with a babbling brook.  You're there on a lovely
summer's day...holding someone's head under the 
water.  Now you're letting them up for a second.
Then blam!  Back into the freezing water!  Over
and over again!  There.  Feel better?