A very good read. :) While the plot itself is, perhaps, not the most
original, the level of writing was enough to counter this.

   More to the point, it was damn funny. :) And we don't get many good
comedy fics anymore, more's the pity. They tend to be either angstfics or
ones focused on emotional turmoil...two worthy topics, but easy to get
tired of. Humor, on the other hand, is something you can never have to
much of in sufficient variety.

   Particularly liked the commercial. :)

   Hope to see more of this series.

- Mike Loader
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