Lemonade Punch#1: Ranma Fever
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Started:10/10/95
Last update:11/8/95
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Why should I care if you get offended then flame me! Come'on,
gimme a break, if you're underage I said to STOP READING! Jeez,
like you're really going to listen to me. Aw doesn't anyone ever
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Lemonade Punch #1: "Ranma Fever"
by Paladin
"Ah, what a peaceful day. Eh Saotome?", said a blissful
Soun as he drank sake with his long time friend, Genma Saotome.
The kids were still at school, Ryouga had been lost for a week,
Happousai was out on a panty run and wouldn't be back till night,
and the weather was perfect.
"Indeed, Tendo.", Genma looked thoughtful for a moment,
"Too peaceful...". With that he dumped a pail of cold water on
his head and disappeared behind a bush. After some rustling Panda
re-emerged with a pith-helmet on and pillows strapped about his
body.
"Eh? What are you doing my friend?"
Panda held up a sign: "Preparing."
"For wha-"
"YAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!", screamed Ranma as he burst through
the door slamming into Soun and jumping on Panda's head. Panda
sign: "See?". Ranma ran around the dojo as Akane chased him with
a giant wooden mallet, dodging the blows and spouting poor attempts
at apology.
"I didn't mean it that -YAH!- way! I just meant -whoops
missed me- that your hips are durable! YOW! THAT HURT! OF
COURSE THEY'RE DURABLE! THEY'RE AS THICK AS-"
"YOUR HEAD!", with that Akane slammed Ranma through a wall
into the Tendo garden pond. The mallet mysteriously disappeared
as Akane sniffled and ran to her room.
"HEY! WHATCHA DO THAT FOR! IT WAS A COMPLEMENT!", cried
a feminine Ranma-chan. "Jeez, she's always so sensitive. That's
just 'bout the only thing feminine about that Macho Chick...
oh hiya pop!", Ranma greeted a seething Genma.
"Raaaannnnma! Akane is your fiancee, what did you do this
time boy?!? Until I know that and you apologize to Akane, no hot
water for you!"
"Hey, it's not my fault! I even said she'd be a good
mother..."
-=-=-
Akane stared at the ceiling as she thought about earlier
that day. She was heading out the door of health class when Ranma
caught her and pulled her back into the room. They had just learned
about the rigors and joys of birth.
...
"Akane... I just wanted to tell you that I think you could
be a great mother...", Ranma had sounded dead serious. Akane's
heart leapt.
<Mo...ther.... Could it be? Does he really want to have
children with me? Does this mean he might actually lo-> Akane
hadn't noticed that her eyes began to glimmer, and that this made
him nervous. Having a crowd of whispering, giggling, and pointing
girls didn't help him much either.
"I mean, with hips that wide, you could give birth to a
bus and barely feel it!", he yelled trying to recover. Akane felt
a stab in her chest and then a heat rose to her cheeks which quickly
turned into fire.
"RAAAAANNNNNMAAAAAA NO BAAAKAAA!", Akane screamed, smashing
Ranma through several walls. In her fury Akane didn't notice the
tears going down her cheeks.
...
"That JERK! I HATE HIM! Every time we might get close
he has to do something stupid!", a sad thought came to her and
momentarily stopped her fury, <or I do something clumsy... could
it be all *my* fault?>. Akane clenched her fists and refueled her
anger, "What do *I* care?!? Why should I care what that perverted
jerk thinks of me!!!" The soft thought came <Because I love him...>
again the anger subsided. Akane flipped over and quietly sobbed
into her pillow.
-=-=-
"Thanks for the water and ramen Shampoo!", Ranma yelled as
he left. <Stupid old man... heh heh. Thinks he can keep me from
getting hot water.> As Ranma rounded the corner he was greeted by
the sight of Ryouga carrying a pail of water.
"Greetings Ranma! Your old man said you might try something
like this... told me to be prepared. YAAAAA!", Ryouga yelled as
he dove forward.
"I don't have time for this you jerk, I'm late for dinner!"
Ranma crouched then flipped backwards and kicked the pail upwards.
"SQUEEEEEE! Oink! Grrrrrreee!" Ranma laughed and mock
saluted the transformed Ryouga.
"See ya later, P-Chan!"
-=-=-
Ranma was panting by the time he got home. His father has
enlisted the help of all the weirdoes in town to keep him in his
girl form. He had evaded all of them but it wasn't easy, everywhere
he turned he saw another person carrying a pail of water.
He sneaked into the house trying to avoid his father.
As he passed the kitchen he saw Kasumi cooking in the kitchen.
<Kasumi too nice to turn me in, I might even be able to get her
to keep some heated water for me, just in case.>
"Um, hi Kasumi, seen my Dad around?"
"He's with Father in the garden."
"Thanks... uh, could you keep some water on the stove for
me? You know, hot water?"
"Ranma, I could never go against your father's wishes...
Besides, I think you should make up with Akane too."
"That tomboy! No way! Thanks anyway."
"RAAAANNNNMA!", Genma was enraged.
"Yipes!"
"What are you doing in that form! You are being punished!
If you cannot take the punishment, then apologize to Akane!"
Mr. Saotome chased Ranma all throughout the house with a
pail of cold water. "Yahhh! Stop it you old fool!"
-=-=-
Ranma crawled into his room. He had managed to trick
Genma, and escaped... barely. <Jeez, how could a lazy looser like
Dad have so much energy when it come to punishing/training me?!?>
He started crawling to his bed when he ran into a pair of legs.
"YAAHHH!", he yelled. Then calmed realizing it was only
Nabiki.
"Oh.<pant,pant> I thought it was someone else. I mean
Dad and those weirdoes chasing me everywhere with cold wa-*<SPLASH>*!"
"HEEEYYY!!", cried Ranma-chan.
"Sorry Ranma-baby, but for a dead-beat, no-job leech your
Dad pays pretty well when it comes to punishment! Of course it's
always negotiable....", Nabiki dangled a steaming kettle in front
of him.
"I so tired... all right, I'll pay."
"Good boy... here you go, nice hot water." Ranma greedily
grabbed the kettle and poured.
"Thanks Nabiki, you don't know how good it is to be a
guy again. I mean-*<SPLASH>*... HEY!!! Y-YOU... YOU!"
"Sorry Ranma, but your Dad paid in advance for just such
an occasion... you know he's really quite thorough with it comes to
punishment... of course it's all negotiable..."
"GET OUT OF HERE!!! NOW!!!!"
"My, my, aren't we overreacting a little bit? See ya later."
Smiled and exited, leaving a wet, fuming, and female Ranma.
-=-=-
"Stupid tomboy... I didn't even mean it... I wouldn't ever
really mean it... I", Ranma stopped herself, "Aw what do I care!
All that macho chick ever does is beat me on the head! Now I'm
stuck as a girl cause of her." She had been moved by the joys of
birth lesson in health and for once tried to say what she felt to
Akane... but that stupid girl had to over-react, all those other
girls laughing... that stupid, stupid, stupid girl. She tossed
another pebble into the pond as her mind began to wander...
<Aw stop insulting her you jerk! It's your own fault, you
always tease her when you feel open.>
<But she doesn't have to take it so hard!>
<It hurts the most to be insulted by one you love.>
<Wha-!?! Love?!?>
<You know it's true, but you always keep a barrier between
you two. If you were a real man you'd let down your
defenses and apologize.>
<I... I can't... I... aw, what the hell! I'll apologize,
but only because I need some hot water.>
<You know that's not the only reason... you love her.>
<...>
It often scared him that when he was a girl his thoughts
would take on two sides and that they sometimes argued. He was
thankful that his male side remained dominant and in control...
most of the time.
"Guess I should go see Akane." Ranma got up and jumped
off the roof. <This time, I'll use the door. Every time I use
her window, I end up falling two stories and landing on my face.>
He knocked softly. "Akane? You in there?" No answer. She tried
the knob and found it unlocked. Entering quietly, she found
Akane sleeping on her side, still in her uniform.
Ranma pulled a chair next to the bed, sat there and watched
her for a moment. <She really is cute...> She was shocked when
she realized she was gently stroking her face with the back of her
hand. She began to pull it away when Akane stirred an held Ranma's
hand to her face. Unconsciously she mumbled, "Ran...ma..".
Ranma tried to pull away again but her grip was too firm,
she couldn't do it without waking her. Akane began to stir even
more, yawned slowly, and her eyes fluttered open. She looked up
at Ranma and smiled... then blushed when she realized she was
clutching Ranma's hand to her chest in an embarrassing position.
Ranma was frozen in terror. <She hasn't realized yet.
Any second now it'll reach her brain... 3... 2... 1... Contac->
"RANMA! YOU PERVERT!", her fist swung around to break
her head when she stopped short. She realized that even though
the thought had reached her brain, her hand still held hers to
one of her breasts. Akane's mind told her to let go, but she
kept Ranma's hand there. Ranma saw the confused look in Akane's
eyes and started to speak.
"Akane..." Akane put a finger to his lips. She didn't
know why, but she closed her eyes and slowly drew her face to
his. <I should stop... but this feels right...> <We're going
to do it... but I never dreamed I'd kiss her as a girl.> Their
faces were centimeters apart when- *<SMASH>*
"HAPPOUSAI!!! I HEEEERREEEE!!!!", screamed a little old
man as he smashed through the ceiling of Akane's room. <Couldn't
he wait one minute! Just one fucking minute!> A pissed off
Ranma-chan cased after him. <Wow... I was really going to kiss
Ranma.... as a girl?>
"HAPPOUSAI YOU JERK! GET BACK HERE!", yelled Ranma
chasing after the old man.
"HAPPOUSAI WHERE ARE YOU!?!" The little man demolished
walls as he ran through the Tendo household. It's inhabitants
left their rooms to see the what the commotion was about.
"Damn! I was told he was here!", muttered the man to
himself. He didn't notice Ranma's incoming foot. *<BLAP>*
Standing on the old man's head, "What's the meaning of this
Happousai? And where's your panty bag?" The old man threw
Ranma off himself flipped backward and dusted himself off.
"Ahhh. So you know him..."
"Know who, you old fool?!?"
"Why, my brother Happousai! Don't tell me he's never
told you about me... though I can't say I'm not surprised,
he hardly ever mentions me, you know?" Everyone gasped,
"BROTHER?!?" "As if one of them isn't enough...", muttered
Ranma.
"What is your business here?", asked Soun.
"I seek to be with my brother... he's always avoiding
me, you know? But I always find him every decade or so...
sort of a family game. Pity he spends so little time with me...
he's the tame one of the family, you know?"
"TAME?!?", echoed everyone.
"Yes... he's always been the non-violent type... and
with women he's really shy... always restricting himself to
mere ogling, groping, and panty snatching. He's never tried
bondage or rape... and in dark magic... wouldn't even touch
the stuff. I mean, is he a bore or what?"
"...", said the shocked household.
"Well if he doesn't live here, know where I can find him?"
"..."
*<SMASH>*
"HENTOSAI!!! DIE!!!", cried Happousai as he smashed
through the ceiling, into his brother.
"Dear brother! How's it- oof!", Hentosai said with a
foot in his face. Happousai launched his attacks while Hentosai
calmly dodged them.
"Why do you follow me?!? Can't you see I hate you!"
"Oh come now, brother, we are family... we belong together!"
"AURGH!!! HUNDRED-HAPPOUDAIKARIN ATTACK!!!", Happousai
began to toss firecracker bomb after firecracker bomb at his
brother who began to juggle them merrily... until they blew up.
-=-=-
Ranma-chan's body ached but she got up anyway. She
groaned and looked around at the devastation. It seemed she was
the last to get up. Happousai was talking to everyone else.
"...always bully me. So we were never really close.
And after that incident you can see why I blew him to space."
"But how can you do that to him? I thought you said
his perversion and dark magic makes him a hundred times
stronger than you?"
"I think he lets me win... it's all a game to him.
Besides, he's also insane and senile, that ruins his concentration.
But thank God I have these lovely girls to look after me!"
Happousai jumped at Akane's chest, but was promptly flatted
face-first into the ground.
"I don't feel *that* sorry for you!"
"Ohhhh but you do feel sorry for me! I knew you had
feelings for me!"
"Get away from my fiancee you pig!!!", Ranma-chan smashed
a table over Happousai's head. Happousai showed no sign that he
felt the hit.
"Ah Ranma-chan, my girl! Wearing a bra yet?" He leapt for
Ranma's chest but encountered only Ranma's foot and Akane's fist.
"Uhnnng." Hentosai got up. He shook his head and grinned.
"Otouto... you sly dog! I thought you'd remain a virgin
your entire life... but you are surrounded by beautiful women.
Perhaps I might have a taste of their sweet honey!" Hentosai
dove at the Tendo girls and Ranma-chan. But Soun, Genma, and
Happousai jumped to the girls' defense.
"Stay back you foul old man!" All three coordinated their
attacks but the skilled Hentosai slipped past and went for Ranma.
Hentosai expected no serious defense from the girls so he was
surprised when he caught a stepping round-house kick to the face
from Ranma. Hentosai tried again but Ranma deftly sidestepped and
stomped on his head. Hentosai growled and dove only to receive a
uppercut that smashed him into the ceiling. He was getting annoyed.
"Grrrrrowl! So Happousai, you refuse to share your
fruits... You've trained them well, but are they prepared for my
Ultimate Technique? HENTAI HENTOSAI PASSION FEVER ATTACK!!!!"
Hentosai jumped into the air, his hands became a blur as his hands
went back an forth, tossing golden dust from a bag.
Hentosai landed, assumed a lotus position, and began to
laugh quietly. Everyone rubbed the dust out of their eyes,
Akane sneezed, Nabiki calmly dusted the powder off her blouse, and
Ranma stared at the glitter sticking to her bare arms.
"That's.... it?", Ranma had expected something more from
a diabolical, perverted maniac, but then again... a simple poke
from Cologne's stick had caused him a cart-load of misery.
"Oh! This will be trouble to clean up.", the simple
Kasumi stated simply.
"Oh I wouldn't worry about the mess, my dear. You
have much bigger problems to worry about. That was my
Passion Fever Attack-"
"P-Passion... Fever?", interrupted a nervous Soun.
"Oh, you don't have to worry. It only affects young...
virgin... females....", he grinned like a Cheshire Cat, "like
you lovely sweets. I can tell from your auras."
Happousai looked worried, "He's done this before! The
victims must loose their virginity by the next sunrise or die
a horrible agonizing death."
"Unless I take their virginity, they will all die!"
"What did the ones before us do, Happousai?"
"They all died the agonizing death rather than be taken
by my evil brother."
"OOOOHHH Kasumi...*<SOB>*... Nabiki*<SOB>*... Akane
*<GASP>* what will I do with out you!", sobbed Soun.
"They *don't* have to die! You just have to let me take
their virginity. I'll start with you." Hentosai pointed at Kasumi.
Soun stood in front of his daughter and guarded her.
"I'd take her virginity *myself*, before I let *you* touch
her!!!" Kasumi's face flushed. Soun realized what he had said
and attempted a stuttering apology, adding a prayer to his late
wife, begging for forgiveness.
"You idiot! By midnight, they'll be begging be to take
them... but I'll save them the trouble of groveling. I choose
this one!" He succeeded in attaching himself to Akane's chest.
He groped her mercilessly and tore the front of her dress.
"RANMA!", Akane cried. Something in Ranma-chan broke.
"GET. OFF. HER. YOU. BASTARD! YAHHHHHHHH!!!" Ranma
drove Hentosai's head into the ground. She began her Kachuu
Tenshin Amaguriken attack without calling it out. She wasn't
using kid gloves either, her fists glowed with the powerful energy
of Chi. The image of Akane crying, clutching onto the fragments
of her dress was burned into her head. She hit Hentosai over...
and over.. and over.... she wasn't about to stop either.
<Ranma doing this for me? I can't let him kill a person, he'll
never forgive himself.>
"Ranma... Ranma. Ranma, stop this. Don't do this over
me! It's not that bad, I'm still wearing a bra, I was just
surprised. Ranma stop!" Ranma couldn't hear her. Akane was
his. Akane was his. Akane was his. No one touches her. Akane was
his. Akane was- *<SLAP>*
Ranma broke out of her trance... she stared bewildered
at a wide-eyed Akane, who clutched her chest and look liked she
was going to cry.
"I'm sorry Ranma... I'm sorry... I had to, I couldn't
let you kill... I'm sorry...", she mumbled.
"A-Akane...? No, you were right... thank you. Are you
okay?"
"Yeah... what are you doing with Hentosai?", she asked as
Ranma picked up the bruised mass.
"I'm punting him to Mexico, so he won't bother us again."
"But you always do that Happousai."
"Naw, I only knock him into stratosphere... I kicking this
guy into orbit!"
"You can't kill him."
"I won't, Happousai says he's too tough to be licked by
him, so a few hundred mile drop should barely scratch him."
Ranma punted Hentosai into the sky, where he became a glinting
star. Happousai jumped and gave Ranma a hug, burying his face
between her breasts.
"Oh Ranma! You beat him! You're my hero, I-"*<SMASH!>*
"Leave me alone, pervert! This is no time for celebrating.
We must find a cure for Akane!" He added as an after thought and
because Nabiki was frowning at him, "and her sisters!"
"No problem, my boy! All they have to do is experience
an orgasm as their virginity is taken by a male!" Everyone blushed
at his bluntness, even the cool Nabiki.
"And I'm just the one to do it! Soun could never commit
incest and Genma's wife would kill him immediately. I'm the
perfect candidate!"
"You disgusting, dirty old man! Get out of here!" Ranma
punted Happousia skyward.
"Without Happousai, how will we find a cure?"
"We still got an eligible male...", Nabiki looked at Ranma.
"Hey wait! I wouldn't be surprised if Happousai planed this
with his brother so that they could live out their sick, perverted
fantasies", Ranma-chan interrupted, "It's just a hoax, so don't be
looking at me to take anyone's virginity or anything!"
"I agree with Ranma, Happousai is not above doing something
like this to innocent girls.", Genma said.
"But can we take such a risk?", Soun questioned.
"Don't worry Daddy... Ranma's probably right. Besides,
if any of us start to feel agonizing death coming along, we can
always go to Ranma-kun to do the deed." Nabiki gave Ranma a
mischievous and seductive smile. Akane ground her teeth.
"Okay, that's a good plan. Why dishonor my daughters
over a hoax... we can wait. But please call Dr. Tofu, we must try
to validate the risk of this situation-", said Soun.
"Already on it, Dad!", Nabiki called from the kitchen phone.
After a few moments, Nabiki returned and shrugged. "I can't reach
him... I can't think of anywhere he might go...."
"Yes, that's odd... well, guess there's not much we can do.
The Master is a truely evil pervert, but he would never endanger the
lives of my lovely daughters. I think it's safe to say it's a hoax."
"Just in case, Pop, you'd better let me have some hot
water to change into my male form."
"No son, like Tendo says, we can wait. After all,
we wouldn't want to interrupt your punishment over a hoax.", Genma
grinned. He didn't notice the bucket of water until it was too
late. Panda sign: "Forever ungrateful for the discipline I try
to teach him!" *<Sigh>*
-=-=-
Ranma-chan laid on her futon, staring into the dark. After
the Hentosai affair, the house quieted down, and the whole Passion
Fever really seemed to be just a perverted plot. Ranma was being
granted a rare gift, she was sleeping alone. Panda was sleeping
in the kitchen, by the stove, the kettles and pots, and by the
water main... he was being very thorough.
It was nice to sleep alone for once except for the fact
she couldn't sleep... could it be she was so used to sleeping
next to a giant panda? She thought back to earlier that day
when she had been in Akane's room. For some reason, she felt
all tingly between the legs when she thought about it. That
had never happened before.
When her hand was on Akane's breast, she was amazed at
how much she could feel and notice in her palm. Even through
her dress, blouse, and bra she had felt Akane's nipple grow hard.
Funny... the same thing happened when he tried hitting Miss Hinako's
pressure points as a boy. As a girl, nothing happened.
What made her nipple harden? Was it the hand? Ranma
cupped her breasts through her T-shirt. Nothing. Was it the
thought? She began thinking about Akane cupping her breasts.
Now she felt a tingle in her nipples. Ranma-chan didn't know what
to do next. Instinctively, she begin to squeeze her breasts and
rub the T-shirt over her nipples. The rubbing felt good so she
began to make circles with thumbs over them. She tried pinching
them between her forefinger and thumb and let out a gasp.
Ranma's fantasy switched back and forth between, Ranma
fondling Akane's breasts and Akane fondling Ranma's. She needed
more direct contact. Ranma-chan sat up and flung off her T-shirt.
She grabbed her soft flesh and kneaded. The sensations between
her legs grew, soon she found her hand in her boxer shorts.
Ranma had masturbated a few times before as a male, mostly
after seeing Akane naked, but he had never done it as a female.
Rubbing her pussy she found some relief so she continued to do it.
As she rubbed faster and faster a finger slipped in, Ranma let out
a soft moan. She found that when she touched a certain part, it
felt even better.
Stroking her fingers in and out felt good, she felt
something coming... but it wasn't enough. Ranma frantically kicked
off her boxers and looked around the room, still fingering herself.
After some rummaging, she found what she wanted. She took the
long wooden tonfa, an asian nightstick, and smiled.
She sat down and spread her petals easing the stick in.
She shivered slightly because it was cold and because of the
sensation. It moved easily in her slick wetness until it met
resistance. Ranma was virtually possessed so she broke the resistance
and found a new level of pleasure beyond. She ignored the pain,
instead reveled in the fullness the sick provided, but somewhere
in the back of her mind she wondered what had she broke.
Ranma knew she was on the edge, using the speed of her
Amaguriken attack she stroked herself dozens of times while she
arched her back. She moaned louder this time. "Ohhhhh Ohh Oh
OH GOD UNG! UNG UNG UNG!" She came and came and collapsed.
As she panted in the afterglow of her first female
orgasm, she reflexively licked the improvised dildo and her
fingers. Ranma liked the taste and the smell. She didn't really
think why she lacked the normal endurance and stamina but instead
thought: <I didn't know girls had it so good... I wonder if they
all do this? I know I'll defiantly do this again... perhaps I'll
share it with Akane....> With that thought, Ranma drifted off to
sleep.
-=-=-
Nabiki lay on her bed reading a manga. It was almost
2 o'clock in the morning and she couldn't sleep, so she was
re-reading her entire manga collection, a trick that usually
worked but didn't seem to help tonight.
She paused when she realized a pleasant feeling coming
from between her legs. She put down her manga to see that she
had been slowly fingering herself. Nabiki thought about finishing
herself off when a thought came to her.
Going over the wall, she put her listening glass to the
wall and listened in on Ranma's room. After a while, she smiled
and put the glass away. After checking herself in the mirror,
Nabiki opened her door and walked into the hall.
-=-=-
Kasumi felt strange. She couldn't sleep. Even after
leafing through her set of cookbooks and straightening her room
a hundred times, she still wasn't tried. Another thing was the
funny tingly feeling she felt between her legs. She sometimes
felt that when she saw Dr. Tofu or even a shirtless Ranma. She
had thought it might be sexual arousal, but she felt it when she
saw a topless Ranma-chan and girls didn't feel that way... did
they?
Kasumi closed her book and went over to her perfectly
made bed and turned the sheets for the thirtieth time. As she
was finishing tugging on a corner, her pelvis brushed against
the bed post. Kasumi rapidly drew in a breath. Her eyes half
closed as she rested her weight on the corner of the bed and
ground her mound into the bed knob. Even through her skirt and
panties, Kasumi could revel in the effect.
Suddenly her eyes shot wide open.
"What am I doing!" Kasumi blushed, smoothed out her skirt,
and straightened her blouse. She sat on her bed when a knock came
from the door.
"Hey Kasumi? It's Nabiki, can I come in?"
"Go ahead, the door's open." Nabiki leaned against the
doorway. She wore a loose-neck T-shirt that exposed her midriff
and shorter-than-usual cutoffs. She closed and locked the door
behind her and gave her sister a wicked smile.
She put her hands on her hips, planted her feet shoulder
width, and began to twist at the waist.
"You know, I haven't been able to sleep."
Nabiki reached her left hand across her body to touch her
her right foot, stood upright, and repeated the action with her
right hand and left foot... she was doing warm-ups.
"I've had a lot of extra energy since that phony Passion
Fever attack. Only I've been thinking... maybe it's not so phony."
Kasumi didn't respond. Nabiki bent forward, the top of
her shirt hung down giving Kasumi a full view of her sister's
chest... and she wasn't wearing a bra. Without looking at her
sister, Nabiki knew Kasumi was seeing exactly what she wanted her
to see.
"I mean, you're still up... and we're not the only two...
You see *if* we were to get affected by a sudden wave of passion
and uncontrollable lust, we'd need the extra energy. Right?"
Kasumi couldn't respond to her sister's question.
Partially because she hadn't heard it and partially because of
what she was seeing.
Nabiki was facing her sister, upside-down, between her
legs. Her ass was sticking straight at Kasumi and was a sight
to behold. Her shorts were riding up, showing the part where
ass meets thigh and a pair of small and tight panties.
Not only that, but Nabiki seemed oblivious to the fact
that, while upside-down, the loose shirt rested below her chin...
fully uncovering her firm breasts.
Kasumi couldn't think... all she knew was the feeling
between her legs and the desire she had for her sister.
"Well if my guess is right, Ranma will be over here a
little later. So we've got to get you nice and wet for him
to slide in...." Kasumi heard what Nabiki said, and it excited
her, even though she didn't quite understand. Nabiki stood
right in front of her and pulled Kasumi up to her. Suddenly
she pulled Kasumi in close, and kissed her passionately.
While they explored each other's mouths with their tongues
their hands explored their bodies. Nabiki brought her hands down
to the small of Kasumi's back and pushed Kasumi's pelvis into hers.
Then she moved to Kasumi's ass and rubbed the fabric in circles,
a gently used her fingers to push into the crack.
Kasumi's hands were at Nabiki's waist but she moved them
to Nabiki's side then to her front, slid up her shirt, and
squeezed her sister's firm breasts. Nabiki gasped.
Nabiki undid her cutoffs leaving her in tight panties
that clung to her moistness. Kasumi grabbed the exposed flesh
and kneaded. She pulled Nabiki's panties out of her crack and
pushed a finger up her ass. Nabiki cupped Kasumi's cunt and
rubbed, Kasumi moaned into their kiss.
Nabiki broke their kiss and moved down her sisters body.
Nabiki knelt before Kasumi as she held up her skirt. Nabiki
held on to Kasumi's pantied ass as she smelled her sister and
rubbed her face into Kasumi's pantied pussy.
Nabiki pulled the panties down and looked at Kasumi's
mound. She blew on it gently and teased it with her tongue.
Kasumi violently grabbed the back of her sister's head and
drove it into her cunt as he tilted her head back and moaned.
Nabiki began to lick and suck without mercy. Kasumi
lay back onto her bed, skirt bunched at her waist, and wrapped her
thighs around Nabiki's head.
Nabiki peeled off her own panties and climbed onto her
sister's face. As Nabiki ate, Kasumi attempted to duplicate
her sister's work between moans. Nabiki who never had much
endurance, quickly came all over Kasumi's face as she tried to
lick it all up.
Kasumi had amazing endurance for her first orgasm. It
took much more licking, some fingering, and even a little
spanking to get her to cum. As the pleasure racked her body,
Kasumi felt she had missed out, never trying this with her
sisters before. She had never even dared masturbate, fearing
she would be found out and no longer regarded as the perfect
homemaker. But had she talked about it with her sisters she
would have found out that Nabiki masturbated compulsively and
that Akane was just beginning to... and liking it.
After resting in the warmth of their orgasms, Nabiki
reluctantly moved her face from its position and turned around.
She lay on top of her sister gently kissing her face, lips, and
neck. Her breasts squished against Kasumi's, she mumbled,
"I think we got you wet enough."
"Nabiki... thank you. I love you."
"Yeah, I love you too, Kasumi." She meant it too, she
had never felt so close to her sister. <I'm still really horny
but I'll let Kasumi rest before we start again. After that all we
have to do is wait for Ranma and Akane...>
-=-=-
Akane had gone to sleep but woke up and couldn't get
sleepy again. She had the strange feeling that Ranma was awake.
No matter what she tried, she couldn't get him/her out of her
head. <Maybe he's lonely, sleeping alone? I'll go talk to him.
Maybe he's ready to apologize.>
Not knowing exactly why, she snuck by Panda, still in her
nightie, and heated a kettle of water for Ranma. She opened
the door and entered. As she approached she could see more
clearly, and what she saw began to excite her.
Ranma-chan lay face up, naked on her futon asleep. Her
head was turned to one side and had the tips of fingers at her
lips. Her legs were spread and the other hand rested in between
there. To one side lay a glistening rod.
Akane wasn't inexperienced in this field, she knew what
had happened here and it excited her. She put down the kettle and
unconsciously rubbed her mound through her nightie.
Akane picked up the tonfa and licked it. She knelt down
and kissed Ranma on the forehead. Taking Ranma's hand, she
licked in between the fingers. She took one of Ranma's breasts
and kneaded it. Fiddling with the nipple, she positioned her
head between Ranma's legs. She inhaled Ranma's sent deeply
and took a few slow licks.
Akane didn't realize her trance-like state, she was living
out one of her hidden fantasies... oral sex with Ranma-chan. Only
that fantasy was so hidden, she didn't even know about it.
Akane always felt that she was disgusted by oral sex.
Experimenting only once, by tasting her own cum, she secretly liked
it but would not even admit it to herself. Now she was eating
Ranma as her favorite dish.
The sleeping Ranma moaned audibly and tried to finger
herself. Encountering something already doing a good job, her
hands moved to stimulate her breasts. Akane held onto Ranma's
thighs, feeling the need to please Ranma. As if that would quench
her own desires.
Suddenly, Ranma snapped awake in mid moan. She was about
to scream when she realized what was happening. <A-Akane...?>
She couldn't think right now, she was on the edge and needed
release. Ranma grabbed the sides of Akane's head with her thighs,
and the back with her hands, forcing Akane into her desperate pussy.
Akane went faster as Ranma's moans became so loud that she feared
that someone would be disturbed. Ranma came and provided Akane with
the juices she had worked so very hard for.
After cleaning as much as she could, but nowhere near full,
Akane look up with a cum covered face to see Ranma propped up on
her elbows, looking with wonder into Akane's eyes. Akane crawled
onto Ranma and they kissed. Akane held onto one of Ranma's breasts
as Ranma's hands went up Akane's shift to hold her ass.
To her surprise and delight she found that Akane wasn't
wearing any underwear. She dug her fingers into the soft flesh
and Akane responded by grinding her crotch into Ranma's. While
Ranma really enjoyed this... she felt something missing.
"Aka-mmmm- Akane- umf- ung- wait. Wait. I really love
this... I really love you." she stopped, she had said it. Yet
there were no fireworks, no pain, or even cheesy violin music.
It came out naturally, perhaps it was easier as a girl to say it...
or perhaps they both already knew it. All she felt was the great
weight of denial lifting off her chest.
Akane felt the world go pink. Her heart soared and her
soul danced. <He said it! He said it!> In her heart she had
always known, it was only a matter of time before he said it, but
to actually hear it!
"Oh Ranma! I love you to!" She hugged her around the
neck and kissed her passionately over the mouth. Ranma let it
linger then reluctantly broke the kiss.
"As I was saying... I love you, and I want to share this
with you but... I'm not really a girl. I mean I can feel the
things a girl feels, and that's great, but I'm a guy... and we're
both missing out on something when I'm in this form." she glanced
suggestively down at her crotch. Akane giggled.
"I was wondering why I brought this!"
"Hot water!", she began pouring, "Akane, you think of
everything." Ranma-chan kissed Akane as she began to change.
They were kneeling, facing each other while kissing. In that
position, Akane's nightie rode above her waist and exposed her mound.
With the transformation complete, the head of Ranma's hardened
member pushed sightly in between the lips of Akane's pussy.
Akane blushed when she looked down. It was big! Not as
large as in her fantasies, but something to be reckon with
nonetheless. She drew back and tentatively grabbed it. It was slick
with Ranma's girl-cum so her hand slid easily when she stroked it.
Seeing the reaction on Ranma's face, Akane continued to stroke it.
She brought it to her mouth and sucked on it. Then broadly
licked at the head. She wanted more cum. The inexperienced Ranma
couldn't hold it. He shot his thick creamy load down Akane's eager
throat. Akane licked her lips and smiled. With different sexes,
Ranma came in different flavors. She started licking his penis
again and it quickly hardened. He commanded her to stop.
Laying back and pulling Akane on top of his legs, he gently
parted hers as she guided his member into herself. It easily
slid in, making a squishing sound. Akane gasped and Ranma let out
a soft grunt.
As Akane began to slide down until she met some resistance.
She gritted her teeth and dove down quickly, sliding up and down
furiously, trying to overwhelm the pain with pleasure. Akane had
never felt so full and wonderful.
The thin straps that held up her nightie fell off her
shoulders, exposing her magnificent globes of flesh. Ranma
brought his rough hand up to fondle one. Then pulled it to his
mouth, teasing it with his tongue and sucking on it. His other
hand squeezed her buttock as they moaned loudly.
Akane sat up and impaled herself over and over on his
hard, slick member, and the two wished that this moment would
never end.
"Huuung Huuuuuunn NNNG Oh Ranma! Ranma I love you!"
"Ah ahh AHH A-A-Akane. Akane! AKANE!"
They two couldn't resist the tidal wave any longer cumming
at the same time, juices flooding Akane's cunt and mixing. Akane
collapsed upon him, panting. Ranma couldn't believe how incredible
it had been. <So soft. She was sooo soft and smooth. I hope it was
as good for her as I was for me... she deserves it.>
Akane felt terrific. She was satisfied, but sensed that
she would get some more before the night was done...
After a substantial amount of time, laying in each others arms,
Akane broke the silence.
"Ranma, I love you..." she whispered, she didn't mind saying
it again, and Ranma didn't mind hearing it.
"I love you too Akane...", he kissed her and hugged her
tightly, "It's so wonderful to be able to tell you how I feel.
I've always wanted to talk to you, but I was always afraid."
"You? Afraid?"
"That's what I mean... people see me as a fighter, a
tough guy... to some a jerk." he smiled at her and she blushed,
"If I admitted I loved you, some people would interpret it as a
weakness... and you might have still though of me as a jerk."
"I'm sorry I treated you like that, it was an obvious
defense to something. I think I always knew... I think you
always knew... we were both just too scared."
"Fear's a terrible thing... though it makes me wonder...
why did you over come your fear tonight? Why did you come to
me?" They pondered the question in silence when Akane gasped.
"The Passion Fever Attack!", she got off him, pulled
away, straightened her nightie, and sobbed into her hands.
"Akane! What's the matter?" She turned toward him and
shot her fear-based anger at him.
"You idiot! Don't you see? I came to you out of my love
of life, not you! My subconscious told me to stay alive!", Ranma
grabbed her shoulder and shook her gently.
"No, Akane! I told you I love you! I'm a guy. I'm not
affected by it!"
"You were hit-*<sniff>*-by it as a girl, residual affects."
He tilted her face toward his and looked her in the eye.
"No. I told you... you told me... after I cured you. I
know that I love you. Can you tell me you don't love me?"
"You're right. I love you. I sorry-*<sniff>*-I-I- all
the emotions... I was too happy-*<sniff>*-got scared..."
"Shhhhhh, shhhh. It's all right." She cried quietly into
his shoulder as he stroked her hair. As she wept, her nightie
was falling off and riding up. With her spread pussy against
sitting on his leg, her bare breast against his, and her leg
against his member... any normal man would have taken advantage
of the situation.
But all Ranma could think about was the wonderful girl,
his fiancee, his love, laying in his arms. He wanted her to be
happy, he wanted to do whatever he could for her, he would even
die for her, he would-
"Akane!!! Your sisters!"
"Wha-?" she rubbed the tears out of her eyes.
"The Fever is real! Oh man! We gotta get Dr. Tofu...
to heal 'em... and if he can't... well Kasumi's always liked him-"
"No Ranma, there's no time! It's five in the morning,
the sun will be up soon."
"Oh God! Akane, I love *you*! I can't- not with your
sisters- I'm going to marry you- dishonorable." Ranma was a nervous
blabbering wreck over the prospect of making love to Kasumi and
Nabiki. He had just declared his undying love and now he was
forced to betray her like this? He couldn't let them die, but
how could he ever make love to them?!?
Akane was much calmer over the matter. She knew it was
sick, but the idea of *her* man fucking her sisters turned her
on beyond belief. She could imagine Ranma slamming Kasumi in
the ass, while Nabiki took care of Kasumi's dripping cunt.
The vision made her horny and she slipped a finger into herself.
"Ranma, I know you love me, and it is because of this
you must save my sisters. I know it tares you apart to do so,
but I'll still love you even after because I know your
sacrifice... besides," her voice turned sultry and seductive,
"it really, really turns me on...." Ranma gulped and stared in
shock. He would do it, but he was still hesitant... would Akane
really not mind?
"O-Okay... I'll do it... but only for you."
"Relax Ranma... I don't mind if you enjoy it. In fact,
try to have a little fun... I'm sure they could use it. Let's
go to Kasumi's room and start with her."
"Might as well... I always liked her better than Nabiki."
Akane flashed him a wicked smile, "Oh realllllly?"
"No- Ah- I didn't mean it that way- I, aw Jeez forget it!"
-=-=-
The Tendo household was always in a constant state of
wreck and repair. So when the lock on Kasumi's door didn't work,
it really wasn't much of a surprise to Akane or Ranma. It was
what they saw inside that shocked them.
Eyes shuttering, head back and swaying was a naked Kasumi
grasping the headboard of the bed while riding Nabiki's face.
With the end of the bed facing the door, Ranma and Akane had
a great view, between Nabiki's spread legs, of her glistening cunt.
Their moaning and gasps made it evident that they didn't
notice the pair's arrival. Kasumi arched her back and let out a
very loud moan. She shook then leaned on he headboard as she
came all over Nabiki's face. Nabiki ate then slid out from under
Kasumi. She sat up and licked her fingers. With a cum covered
face she looked up at Ranma and Akane and smiled.
"I was wondering when you'd get here." they remained frozen
in place, "Well aren't you going to play?" A grin appeared on
Akane's face as she threw her nightie to the ground. Ranma was
fully clothed as they had originally planned not to shock Kasumi...
however, he was the one that was shocked as he watched the Tendo
sisters.
Nabiki again laid on her back as Kasumi sat on her face.
Akane got on top of Nabiki placing her face into Nabiki's crotch
and thrusting her ass into Kasumi's face. Kasumi held one of
Akane's tits, licked, and fingered her. The three worked on each
other in their love triangle as Ranma got very very hard.
Again, Nabiki came first, Akane lapping up her sister's
juices between her own moans. Because of Kasumi's diligent work,
Akane came next, dripping onto Nabiki's chest and Kasumi's fingers.
Nabiki was being cruel. She teased Kasumi but never worked quite
hard enough. She reached up and blindly groped at Kasumi's chest.
Frustrated, Kasumi ground her pussy into Nabiki's face,
nearly suffocating her, that just slowed Nabiki down. Nabiki
forced everyone off her and pushed Kasumi against the headboard.
"You're plenty wet... it's time. Ranma, your turn."
Kasumi was in a desperate state. She wanted to cum so
badly. Nabiki had rose her need then abandoned her post. Now
she felt the sensations ebbing away she needed them to be built
back all over again. Sitting on the cum soaked bed, Kasumi
sat with her arms propping her up behind her, spreading her legs.
"Oh Ranma! Please! I need it!"
"Get to it lover-boy!"
"Oh Ranma! Do it! I want to watch!"
Hearing Kasumi beg for it and her sisters cheering him on,
any inhibitions Ranma possessed earlier quickly vanished. He literally
ripped his clothing off in his frenzy. Kasumi and Nabiki admired
his upright staff. Ranma immediately dove right in. His member
slid easily in and out of her slick cunt.
As he pounded in and broke her hymen without noticing.
Kasumi, herself, barely noticed as she thrust her whole body,
up and down in pleasure. Nabiki and Akane fondled each other but
never took their eyes off Ranma and Kasumi.
Kasumi have never felt so wonderful. Kasumi brought Ranma's
face to her chest and made him suck. Ranma greedily took the nipple
and used his tongue to tease it. Kasumi grabbed his head and
made him inhale it. He began sucking as hard as he could on the
tit. Ranma's hand groped and squeezed the other breast. After a
time he switched giving both sides equal treatment. She wanted to
keep going, but she knew that both her and Ranma were on the brink
of orgasm. She began to thrust her hips faster.
Both Kasumi and Ranma screamed when they came. Kasumi
called out Dr. Tofu's name and Ranma called out Akane's. Kasumi
fell back, tired, and Ranma withdrew his shrinking penis. Nabiki
grinned evily.
"My turn..." she knelt in front of Ranma and took a hold
of his member. Stroking it slightly, she licked off the mixed
juices of her sister and Ranma. Akane moved over to Kasumi and
buried her head between Kasumi's legs. Kasumi moaned softly and
unconsciously. It was as if her mind wasn't there but her body
instinctively enjoyed it anyway.
Ranma's cock stiffened quickly as a result of Nabiki's
handiwork/mouthwork. Nabiki spread her legs while pulling Ranma
on top of her. Although slick, Nabiki was, surprisingly, tight.
Her vaginal muscles squeezed as if to drain Ranma automatically.
After a few tough thrusts, Ranma was able to proceed with long
smooth strokes.
Nabiki loved this but wanted it deeper. Grasping his
buttocks, she thrust into him, breaking hymen herself. She gasped
as she found him even deeper. Ranma's eyes were closed and he
was mumbling something about tightness. Nabiki resistance failed
she came quickly and slickened her hole. Ranma eyes shot open with
an expression close to fear as Nabiki relaxed around his penis.
Nabiki collapsed back onto the floor and went into a similar state
as Kasumi.
He thrusted a few times but it was no use, although still
tight, when she relaxed he couldn't get off. Ranma pulled out and
pushed his dripping cock in her face. She instinctively grabbed it
sucked on it shortly but then pushed it away. Trying like a mother
feeding a baby, Ranma tried to offer it to her again but she turned
her face and pushed it away again.
Ranma was getting frustrated and a little angry. He needed
it now, and this bitch was dozing off on him! <I thought they
say it's the guy who always falls asleep first!> The more he
thought of how he needed it, the more he thought of all the rotten
things Nabiki had done to him. He looked over and saw Kasumi and
Akane busily eating each other. <Kasumi woke up, and Akane's
getting done! I want some!> He was at the point of almost whining.
Suddenly he thought of something.
"Now you're going to get it, bitch!"
He turned her over and parted her butt cheeks. He
slowly guided his glistening member into Nabiki's even tighter
anus. Then with a vengeance, he began to pound her ass with the
speed of his Tenshin Amaguriken attack.
"AaaaaaAAAHHHHHHH!!!", Nabiki cried. She stuck her ass
higher into the air and pushed back into him as her fingers dug
into the carpeting. Ranma reached around and squeezed her breasts
hard enough to hurt her slightly.
Ranma's vision began to blur and he started to feel cold.
Nabiki was already cumming in streams down the inside of her
thighs when Ranma spurted a giant load into her ass. Her ass
quickly flooded over wet slapping sounds could be heard as Ranma
continued to fuck her. Ranma collapsed on top of her his body
still quivering, bone still buried in her ass, and lost consciousness.
Ranma had cum more times this night than he had in his
entire life. For some reason he felt exhausted and wondered if
Akane was tiring. The sun was up and the light was filling the
room. Ranma opened his eyes to see Akane and her sisters hovering
above him, still naked.
"He's already awake. Okay girls, once more all around!"
he heard one of them say as Kasumi descended on his again rigid
cock and Akane on his face. They came, rotated and started again...
-=-=-
Ranma thanked the gods it was Sunday. After what he had been
through, there was no way he could go to school immediately. On
Sundays, everyone, except Kasumi, slept late. So their parents
wouldn't be awake until noon. And those animal sisters made sure
that they used every minute up that time. Not that he minded...
but three girls... over and over... not stopping... he needed
sleep. He needed rest. His cock was sore.
Strangely, their marathon had the exact reverse effect on
the girls. They were energetic to the point of being almost hyper.
They constantly giggled and went about their normal business.
They also continuously used lewd innuendo:
"Ranma, will you be *cumming* with me tonight to the market?"
"Nabiki, you look simply good enough to *eat*!"
Their sense of humor put Ranma on edge. Their fathers seemed
completely oblivious to the jokes but it frayed Ranma's nerves
nonetheless. But besides the jokes, he felt uncomfortable being
with Kasumi and Nabiki. By bedtime, Ranma was completely wound up.
Akane took pity on him.
"Ranma... you look tense. Why don't you take a long, hot
bath," the thought actually relaxed him... "and I'll be in to join
you!" Immediately he was tense again. He had no idea why, but the
thought made him nervous.
-=-=-
"Ahhhhhhh." Ranma felt peaceful. Using meditation, a
cleansing of the mind technique, and the bath were all making him
feel a lot better. Suddenly a shadow appeared across the frosted
glass. <Damn! I forgot Akane was cumming- blast! I mean coming!>
The door slid halfway open and a shapely leg appeared in
the opening. The leg raised, extended, bent, and was caressed by
a pair of hands. The leg retreated an the shadow began to perform
some very suggestive actions. Ranma was rigid again as was his
man-hood. After a few minutes of the silent show, Akane slipped
quietly into the bath. She got a Nabiki-like look and began
to move toward Ranma.
"N-No. Akane stop."
"What's the matter, I didn't set the mood?" she looked like
she was beginning to get angry.
"No... I mean yes... I mean I want to talk about something."
her face softened and the lust left her eye. She sat back and looked
normal... like Akane. Ranma felt more comfortable and prepared to
share his heart with her.
"Last night... this morning... that was terrific. I really
enjoyed it. But... it's weird. You guys all act like you're still
under the Fever."
"We're just happy. Years of sexual repression and desire was
pent up in Nabiki and Kasumi, they got to release it and know that
they always can."
"What! You mean on me! They're cured already! You hentai
girls! Akane, I love you, but I can't do that again! No, I'm
not telling the truth... I could and would want to do it again...
I guess I just don't like the idea of someone else, other than me,
bringing you so much pleasure."
"Ranma, you can't be selfish in that way. My sisters and
I love each other and have found a better way to express that
love and to include you in it."
"I think I already knew that... I just don't want our
relationship to be just sex. I could get that from Shampoo. Lord
knows she only wants my body... or now, your sisters. From you
I want more. I mean, if I were to say we couldn't have sex ever
again... would you still love me?" she didn't hesitate
"Yes Ranma. We *do* have something more. Just because I
want to share our pleasure with others, doesn't mean I value it
less." Ranma absorbed it and believed it. He felt the weight of
emptiness lift and became his normal obnoxious self.
"Good, cause I have a little something to share with you!"
"Oh Ranma! This isn't little at all!... OH RANMA!!!"
-=-=-
Later that week, Happousai returned.
"Oh my sweet girls! You're okay!" He performed his
standard attempt at groping but was intercepted, as usual, by
Ranma. After regaining consciousness and rubbing his head a few
times:
"I see you're all still alive so Ranma owes me details!"
He winked towards Ranma and nudged him.
"I don't know what you're talking about you old fool!"
"Oh of course you do... you know," he made a hole with
his fingers and inserted his other index finger, "Ung Ung *<Pant>*
*<Pant>* *<Sqeeky>* *<Sqeeky>* HWOOOOOOOO!!!" Nabiki stepped on
his head.
"If you're quite done making a fool of yourself, you can
read my lips. Nothing happened. After you left, we all went to
Dr. Tofu's and he cured us... period. Right Ranma?"
"Uh yeah, right! That's it!"
Happousia looked depressed and let out a sigh.
"Oh, I was so hoping for details..." he whined. Suddenly
he brightened up.
"There's good news though, through trickery and Anything-
Goes-Secret-Special-Techniques, I was able to get Hentosai to
follow Ryouga! He'll be lost for centuries! Oo! Oo! It's time
for my panty raid! I'll be back later tonight my darlings!"
-=-=-
Kasumi let out a final muffled moan into her pillow.
She turned over, sweating, and licked clean the vibrator she had
bought from Nabiki. The ability to do this without guilt was
wonderful for Kasumi. She was glad that Hentosai was a pervert and
had used his Passion Fever Attack.
It was a shame that Nabiki and Akane were a school while
she was doing this but who else could she see? Who indeed?
She got up and went to her shelf and pulled down a jar. She
opened it and ran her hands through the golden dust that had been
collected through the vacuum cleaner.
Kasumi closed the jar looked thoughtful for a moment then
grinned like Nabiki always did. After much studying she had derived
the formula for the dust and had made slight modifications to it.
It still retained its powerful aphrodisiac abilities but it worked
on everyone... including Dr. Tofu.
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Author's Notes:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Well that's it for now, I hope you liked it. I wrote this over
about a month's worth of time whenever I got the chance, so I often
had to re-read it just to remember where I was. So I apologize for
any unfluid-ness. Whether you believe it or not this story was an
unintentional lemon. I was playing with the idea of an evil/good
Happousai... when blam! I found myself writing lemon!
If you're wondering about the series title, it supposed mean
that I'll be mixing various plots with little to no connection
all generalized under the same series. Please note that Lemonade
Punch #2 and on might not even have any Ranma characters in it.
Just a few comments: other FanFic writers, Please! Date your work!
When I find it in an archive, I have no idea how long ago it was so
I don't know whether to comment or not. Roy Rim, if you're reading
this, your work was great. To bad you stopped writing lemons... try
picking one up again. Darren Demaine, great work! I'm an avid fan!
SHADE, the same.
Lastly, comments, comments, comments! All I want to do is know if
people are reading and how I can write better. I hope I don't have
to say this, but please no senseless flames! If you don't like this
kind of story, you didn't have to read it. Remember whether there's
more Lemonade Punch to come depends on you! I hope to get a good
response from all of you out there! Don't be a lurker!
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