Gary Kleppe's comments were:

On Wed, 2 Apr 1997 13:29:32 -0500 (EST), Lara Bartram wrote:

	FORWARD:  I wasn't going to send this out, but I was
prodded a bit, and so I'm giving in.  This is not a joke
story!  I have actually written sequels to this (yes, I
know it's sad..)!  I'm not really looking for spell checking,
just your comments.  And if anyone would be interested in
reading a little more..

And I forgot all the legal disclaimers.. Taihen desu

I have no objections to the storyline, but I think we need to know more. What
drove our Heroine to such extremes? How did she change from the girl we knew
into what we see in this story?

And yes, I'd be interested in reading a little more...

Grr.. This is where I smack myself in the forhead a lot.  Why?
Because I forgot to indicate that this is not so much a story
of Nabiki, but of her son.  So where I label it [R1/2], it could
have easily been [ORIG], and that is what I should have done, or
at least pointed that out BEFORE the story.

And due to the numerous requests (so numerous, they number under 5)
for a little more information, I might have to go and write a
couple pre-prequels..  This writing thing gets more complicated
the more I do.. =)

-- 
Lara

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|  "Shindemo kimi o hanasanaizo."  |  in my sig because it's quite
|    -Kuno Tatewaki                |  sweet, no matter WHO says it.
o----------------------------------o       So there.. *phbt* 

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