Oh, my... You are evil... very evil.
Of all the fanfictions I have EVER read... sad, dark, or other... none
has even brought me close to the verge of tears... this one sent me over
the edge in one fell swoop. I consider it a rather hard thing to do,
make me cry that is. For instance... I didn't cry at my own
grandmother's death, whom I loved very much. This fic... it was
masterfully written. Someone told me that 'Zen doesn't write fics, he
crafts them.' This is quite true. I was astounded by the plot as well as
the imagery and descriptive prose you used to write this. My god, man...
have you no mercy?! Even in death Ranma ended up with Ukyou. And
Akane... I won't even GO there...

This has been one of the best fanfics I have EVER read. EVER. Good job.
You depressed the hell out of me. <sniff sob sob>

You are a master at fiction writing. I hope to see much more from you
soon, Zen.
Thanks for this fic,
Mark Eymer
Age 15