Since I seem to have trouble sending to the FFML of late, I figured I'd best send this to you directly just to be safe.

Note:This is a lemon. Reading this over and over again in certain sections 
could cause pain to come about on certain parts of your body.

I suspected as much. You should have labled it on the title though...

I hope you enjoy.....reading this ;)

keyword: f-solo
rating: 5/10

Belldandy was sexually frustrated. She wanted to experience love-making

so bad, it was now entering her mind every few sceonds, preventing her from
concentrating on her work.<<

Sure brings back memories. I tried to start my own AMG lemon this way. Didn't work, but I found an easier way to do it.

 She quickly discarded her bra, throwing it ontop of the shirt, as she

"discarded" and "on top". There's nothing worse than typos in a sex fic. I've seen lot's of these and I wondered if their authors get too caught up in their writting to fix typos.
BTW, you've made quite a few more typos. I'll leave it to you to fix them.

She knew people stole her panties, and why should they.

That's either a question or you need to rearrange your sentence.

She threw her crumpled panties ontop of the rest of her clothes, not
wanting to know.

Why not, Bell-chan? It would add so much more stimulation....

She once found a pair of Urd's soiled panties on sale of a large sum of
money at a nearby garage sale.

Now how did the thief get past the temple's defences? Who cares?

She smiled to herself as she wondered what Keiichi would do if he saw her >like this, saw her masturbating in the kitchen.

(Keiichi steps back from the doorway, smilling...)

But he wasn't that kind of man.

There's only one way to find out, heh heh...

he left the kitchen and headed upstairs to brushen up.

The house is a single-storey one.

Well, should I continue it?

Only if Bell-chan gets laid. Soon. Post it when you're done. There are too few AMG lemons worth reading as it is. 3.

It only took me one sitting to write this. heck, it only took my an hour. So this >lemon was really that time consuming.

Time consuming? Took me weeks to figure out the start of my own lemon. A few more to write the whole thing. Then months after posting it, I decided to rewrite it again. Now that was time consuming!

PS- Who is the creator of AMG?

Fujishima Kosuke.