Joseph "Ashira" Kohle wrote:

        Ranma pushed through the door of Ucchan's, his heart freezing as he
heard noises upstairs.  He got to the doorway of Ukyo's room in time to see
Akane throw her head back and call Ryoga's name.  Ranma stood frozen with
horror, the image of the two of them together etching itself irrevocably
into his memory.  Sick with rage, he silently backed away and crept down
the stairs.  He stood at the bottom of the stairs, seeing nothing, his
mind's eye filled with that single image.  His heart burned with agony and
twisted with dark fury.
        "I...will have revenge..." Ranma whispered into the blackness.

        Are you seriously going to end it like that? Here's a chance to take a
lemon and make it a very interesting story of Ranma's jealousy and dark rage,
which most people seem to ignore. I mean this has so many possiblities that
_I'd_ be tempted to take this story to a conclusion. What do we have here?
Akane was forced to betray Ranma by a drug introduced by Ukyou, his best
friend, and Shampoo. It involved Ryouga, his enemy, and deflowered his love. I
think I can see where it is going. Who does he forgive? Who does he strike
against? Does his original barriers reappear in regards to Akane?
        This has many possiblities and I beg you to continue this. I think many
people will agree with me. C'mon. Do it. If not for everyone else, then because
I hate endings that leave me dangling at a climax with no follow up or even a
deneumonte.

        Joseph Kohle

I have to agree.  Not only does this story scream to be continued, it's
also the first *detailed* lemon with Ryouga and Akane that I've ever
seen.  Did the fact that Akane called out Ryouga's name mean that Akane
now has feelings for Ryouga?  Will Ranma extract his vengence through
violence or use simular methods that Ukyou and Shampoo used on Akane? 
Please continue this story or give it to one of us!  Pretty Please!  :)

Sincerely,

Megane 6.7