Subject: [ranmaoid fic]NARRABUNDAH 1/2 - Volume II, chapter 10
From: Ratbat
Date: 5/1/1997, 12:24 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


                        NARRABUNDAH 1/2
                               
                by Urac Sigma with Suzy Styles
                               
                               
                    Volume II, chapter ten
                               
              Tatakaite! Oretachi no Dojo desune!
                               
                               
                      CAST OF CHARACTERS
                               
                       HAPPOUSAI GRAHAM
                         SIGMATOME LEN
                       SIGMATOME NICOLE
                          TENDO BOBBI
                         TOBOKI CALLUM
                        HINOMIYA RUTHIE
                       HODJSUKE TIMOTHY
                          TENDO FIONA
                        SANZENIN CHRIS
                         KUNOU JARRAH
                        SHIRATORI NOOMY
                          TENDO NIKI
                        KUONJI COLLEEN
                       SIGMATOME RATBAT
                         GOSUNKUGI SAM
                          TENDO SUZY
                       KURENAI CHARLOTTE
                          TOBOKI EUAN
                          SAYURI KIM
       Well, that's roughly the age order, give or take



             TITLE SEQUENCE.

             [Opening  theme: Little Date (alternate version).
             Finishes  with  a  voice-over from  Suzy  and  an
             appropriate art-card.]

SUZY [VO]:   Tatakaite! Oretachi no Dojo desune! 



             1.  OUTSIDE TENDO DOJO.

             [This  is the business end of the dojo,  the  one
             that  lets onto the street, rather than the house
             (no,  I  haven't got a coherent layout  for  this
             place,  but  I'm  figuring that the  odd  student
             that  Bobbi  teaches  probably  doesn't  have  to
             traipse  through Fiona's nice clean  living  room
             to  get  to class). The 'official' dojo  sign  is
             down,  and  the place is most definitely  closed,
             as per a sign across the doors.]

             [CAPTION:  Neribanda, Japan - Monday 18 September
             1995 ]



             2. DOJO PROPER.

             [Ratbat  is  training against Suzy as the  latter
             wears those big padded gloves.]

RATBAT:      I still dinna think it's a good idea...

SUZY:        What isn't?

RATBAT:      Putting  me up to go against Graham and  Jarrah's
             challenge.

SUZY:        It  makes  sense.  You have  fought  Kunou  to  a
             standstill before.

RATBAT:      Aye  -  a  standstill - on both sides,  remember?
             And  that  was  before he did  this  recent  cram
             session with Hentai-sama.

SUZY:        All  the  more reason we should train you  now  -
             then you might actually have a chance!

             [Ratbat stops punching and holds a hand up.]

RATBAT:      Aye  -  but also back then, I could fight  as  an
             otoko.

SUZY:        So?  Why would your girl form be any weaker? From
             what  I  understand, when you got  cursed,  stuff
             like  strength and that carried on straight  from
             whatever you had already. It should be the  same,
             ne?

RATBAT:      It's no strength, it's body awareness.

NIKI [OOV]:  God, you sound like a teen-information program.

             [They  both turn to see that Niki has,  in  fact,
             entered the room.]

RATBAT:      Where did you come from?

NIKI:        Our   mother's  lack  of  body-awareness,   about
             eighteen years ago.

SUZY:        Quiet. Komori-chan, go on.

RATBAT:      My  actual  strength might be  the  same,  but  I
             spent  most  of my life training in  a  different
             body  shape!  Now,  I'm a couple  of  centimetres
             shorter,  my  hands  are smaller,  the  legs  are
             different...chuck   it   into   a    close-combat
             situation, it all starts to add up.

SUZY:        It  shouldn't  make that much difference,  should
             it?

RATBAT:      Han...how come you're no doing it? You're  always
             saying  that  you're better than me  at  anything
             ever!

SUZY:        Are  you  kidding?  I'm as rusty  as  the  Pope's
             underpants! I hardly ever train!

RATBAT:      Ee? What about all the hammers?

SUZY:        They   only  really  work  if  the  other  person
             doesn't  see  it  coming. And I can't  see  Kunou
             being that distracted in a fight.

             [They descend into squabbling. On Niki.]

NIKI:        I  think we might have to have another council of
             war...   These   two  get  distracted   kind   of
             easily...

SUZY [Off]:  ...it wouldn't even fit...!

             [Niki sighs. Dissolve.]



             3. OUTSIDE TENDO DOJO.

             [The same shot.]

COLLEEN [OOV]:    See what I mean?

             [We  see  that  Colleen, Dr Callum and  Euan  are
             here.]

COLLEEN:     They locked themselves up in there yesterday! No-
             one's  answering the phone. I tried at the  door,
             and Fiona told me that they were all busy.

EUAN:        Well, something must be going on.

             [Callum takes Euan aside for a moment.]

CALLUM [Whispers]:Euan - when was...B-chan last in there?

EUAN [Whispers]:  Yesterday.

CALLUM [Whispers]:Do you know what's happening?

EUAN [Whispers]:   No. Suzy-san left me in her bedroom. I went
             to  wait under the bed for her to come back,  but
             I  lost  direction  while I was  under  there.  I
             remember   going   to   this  little   downstairs
             bar...where  everybody knows your name...I  think
             it was called the Winchester, or something.

             [Callum   rolls  his  eyes.  They  go   back   to
             Colleen.]

COLLEEN:     Well, I want to know what it is!

             [Charlotte, wearing a ladies' Armani suit,  leaps
             out from behind a lamp-post.]

CHARLOTTE:   It's 'yes', Kuonji-chan! That's my answer!

             [Colleen  squeals and spatulas him into the  air,
             where  he  does  the oyakusoku  pozu.  Dr  Callum
             watches him as he goes up.]

CALLUM:      ...and  to  think that any other  girl  your  age
             would  be glad to have a guy who'd dote  on  them
             like that...

EUAN:        A guy who wears your size clothes, too.

COLLEEN:     Yeah?  Well, any other girl my age wouldn't  have
             a  childhood  engagement to some  other  guy  who
             won't  pay  attention to them the way they  want,
             not to mention changes sex all the time!

CALLUM:      Suzy is.

             [The  other two glare at him. Suddenly, Charlotte
             is at Colleen's side again.]

CHARLOTTE:   Ah,  but would you be glad to have a guy who  was
             good  enough  at sneaking about to get  into  the
             dojo and find out what was going on?

CALLUM:      Hey, even I'd go for one of them right now!

             [He ends up with Charlotte's fist in his face.]

CHARLOTTE:   I  don't  go  out with guys. Just  what  kind  of
             person  do  you think I am? [To Colleen]  Anyway,
             what do you say?

COLLEEN:     Iie!

CALLUM:      Come  on! Don't you want to know what's going  on
             in there?

             [Colleen  fumes.  Charlotte  looks  at  her  with
             bright, yet evil eyes.]

COLLEEN:     Aarrrggghh!! All right! What will I  have  to  do
             for you?

CHARLOTTE:   Go on two dates with me!

COLLEEN:     Get fucked!

CHARLOTTE:   After a second date? You're a bit excessive!

COLLEEN:     No! I mean, no way! Forget it!

CALLUM & EUAN:    Hey!

COLLEEN:     But he's-- grrrr...one date!

CHARLOTTE:   Two  dates, and you get to pick where we  go  for
             one of them.

COLLEEN:     Two  dates, I get to choose for one of them,  and
             you have to pay for everything on the second.

             [Charlotte considers.]

CHARLOTTE:   Done!

             [Colleen  sighs.  Charlotte  gives  five   to   a
             bewildered Euan. On Dr Callum.]

CALLUM:      How are you going to...

             [He  looks  down  to  face  Charlotte.  He  isn't
             there.]

CALLUM:      Wow! He really is good!

             [Another  shot  shows that Charlotte  has  merely
             moved   behind   Dr  Callum  with   no   trickery
             whatsoever. He shakes his head and moves on.]



             4. DOJO PROPER.

             [Gathered  in  the  room  we  have:  Tendo  Suzy,
             Sigmatome  Ratbat [onna], Tendo Bobbi,  Sigmatome
             Len  (a  panda),  Sigmatome Nicole  and  Hinomiya
             Ruthie  (kodomo). Addressing the group  is  Tendo
             Niki.  Fiona is sweeping down the large  training
             area.]

NIKI:        Now.  At first we thought that we'd just be  able
             to  chuck  Komoriko  at Kunou on  Wednesday,  and
             that'd  be  that.  Unfortunately,  it  looks   as
             though  Komoriko might not be the best challenger
             after all, on account of her being shithouse  and
             everything.

RATBAT:      Oi! That's no quite 'ow I put it!

NIKI:        Tough break, wet-dream-of-Playtex.

RATBAT:      Grrr.

NIKI:        Anyway  -  I  called you all back in here.  Since
             you  all  either  are or have  been  students  of
             Rejinra  martial arts at some point. Kaachan,  as
             the  sensei in this dojo, your presence  here  is
             obvious. The same for you two, Suzy-chan,  Batti-
             chan.  Sigmatome-san - you're technically allowed
             to step forward and fight, as you've learnt self-
             defence under Rejinra.

NICOLE:      Ah-ha...but not just self-defence, Niki-chan...

             [She draws her katana and takes a neat swipe.]

NICOLE:      I  also  know some katana techniques, like  those
             used in seppuku.

             [Both  Ratbat  and  Len get the big  sweat-drops.
             Nicole notices the one on Len.]

NICOLE:      You look worried, Panda-chan.

             [Len's  eyes  go very wide, and he  whips  out  a
             sign.]

             [Sign: It must be hot in here!]

             [Instantly,  Fiona is beside him, handing  him  a
             cold drink. He accepts it.]

LEN:         Mrwwffrww grrmrrr.

FIONA:       Do itashimashite!

             [Nicole's face shows that she is choosing to  try
             to  forget  it.  Len holds up a  sign  that  says
             'Kanpai!', and drains his glass.]

NIKI:        Ruthie-sensei...you didn't train here,  but  your
             Happo  go-en satsu thing is Rejinra as well,  and
             since  this  is the last place left that  teaches
             it...

             [Ruthie is impatiently looking at her watch.]

RUTHIE:      Is  this gonna take loooong? I've gotta go  on  a
             deto tonight...!

             [On Ratbat and Suzy.]

SUZY [Low]:  Ruthie-sensei has a date? Who the hell with?

             [Ratbat   looks  equally  confused,  and  shrugs.
             Ruthie suddenly pokes her head in between them.]

RUTHIE:      Oi! Aren't you two supposed to be in class?!

             [They pale.]

RATBAT & SUZY:    Uhhhh....

RUTHIE:      This is...truancy! You iwwesponsible gakusei!!

             [She  gets  ready and pulls out her coin.  Bobbi,
             however, neatly plucks it from her fingers.]

BOBBI:       Ja, aren't you supposed to be in class?

             [Ruthie snatches her coin back and sulks.]

RUTHIE:      I took care of that already...



             5. SUZY & RATBAT'S CLASSROOM.

             [A  whole group of students (among them Gosunkugi
             Sam)  sit  rigidly in their desks, not daring  to
             move.  On the blackboard is written 'IF YOU  EVEN
             THINK OF LEAVING, RUTHIE-SENSEI WILL GET YOU!'.]



             6. KITCHEN.

             [A   cupboard  door  eases  open,  and  Charlotte
             sticks his head out.]

CHARLOTTE [VO]:   No-one in here...

             [He pauses, listening.]

CHARLOTTE [VO]:    Hmmm...right the first time. It sounds like
             it's coming from round the back...

             [He climbs out, and edges through the kitchen.]



             7. DOJO PROPER.

             [The discussions are fully going.]

NICOLE:      What  if  Suzy-chan  was to go  up  against  him?
             Fiona  tells  me  that Kunou has...some  feelings
             for her. Might that distract him enough to be  an
             advantage?

BOBBI:       Come, Nicole, that's hardly honourable.

NICOLE:      No. You're right. Gomennasai.

BOBBI:       Sumimasen   -  I  didn't  mean  that  there   was
             anything  wrong  with it, I was just  saying  it,
             for  the  record.  There you go,  Suzy!  You  can
             fight  Kunou, we can keep our dojo, and the  next
             day you can marry Ratbat!

             [Looks  pleased  with herself.  Len  holds  up  a
             sign:  'The perfect plan!' Suzy hits him  in  the
             face with it.]

SUZY:        That  won't  work. The rules he  laid  down  said
             that  in  order for someone to go  out  with  me,
             they  had to beat me in personal combat.  That'll
             just make him fight all the harder.

RATBAT:      This  is  true.  Sensei? Do you  think  your  chi
             thing could do it?

RUTHIE:      Maayyyyyybe. But what if it can't?

SUZY:        Right.  God only knows what those two  have  been
             working  on. If he taught her how to  do  it,  he
             might  be able to teach Jarrah how to resist  it.
             Then what does she do?

RUTHIE:      Ne, Tendo-san! 'She' is the cat's mother!

             [Niki looks shocked.]

NIKI:        Nani?  What  have  you heard? I  tell  you,  that
             kitten just looked like me...!

FIONA:       Niki-chan...

NIKI:        Gomen.

             [Len  has  a  new sign: 'What about me?  I  could
             take him.']

NICOLE [Laughing]:Oh,  Panda-chan...that's  so  cute.  But,  I
             don't think so.

             [The  phrase  'Panda-chan!' appears  above  Len's
             head  as  he remembers that this is so. He  tries
             to  make  up  for it. He holds up a  sign  saying
             'But...I'm  a  kung-fu panda!' He  leaps  to  his
             feet  and  starts  doing  showy  fighting  poses,
             while   an   instrumental  version   of   Kung-fu
             Fighting plays. Nicole just thinks that  this  is
             the cutest thing ever, and claps her hands.]

NIKI:        Ano  -  this might all be well and good,  but  it
             doesn't   come   any  closer  to  answering   the
             question: Who the fuck is going to fight  against
             Kunou Jarrah?

             [Fiona coughs politely.]

FIONA:       Aaa...Sumimasen.

BOBBI:       What is it, Fiona-chan?

FIONA:       It's  just  an idea I had, but...if you  want  to
             find  out  who's the best fighter, why don't  you
             actually...fight?

             [Niki  looks from Fiona to the others.  Then  she
             realises  that  they're actually  thinking  about
             it.  We see their expressions for a moment.  Then
             we  see hers: alarm. She quickly runs as we  hear
             the  start  of a fight breaking out. Shortly,  we
             have  a shot of the floor: One of the floorboards
             lifts  up, and Charlotte is underneath. He  pokes
             his head up a few centimetres, then...THWACK!!]



             8. OUTSIDE TENDO DOJO.

             [Charlotte is sent flying out through a  hole  in
             the  wall.  He lands at the feet of  the  others,
             still  waiting. Dr Callum bends down to  him  and
             checks    him   over.   Colleen   looks   faintly
             satisfied.]

COLLEEN:     So what's the story?

CHARLOTTE:   From  what  I  heard, there's been some  kind  of
             challenge,  and  they need  to  pick  their  best
             student  to  fight and win the dojo  back.  That,
             and  that mother woman can do some hellish kicks.
             [Groan] They're right - love does hurt.

             [He slumps his head back onto the ground.]



             9. BEHIND COMMON ROOM.

             [This  part of Narrabundah College is right  next
             to  the public street. Here we find Kunou Jarrah,
             Hodjsuke  Tim,  and Happousai Graham.  Graham  is
             showing  Kunou  some notes he has  written  on  a
             sheet of paper.]

KUNOU:       Sensei, nandesuka?

GRAHAM:      I'm  revising  an old technique of  mine,  m'boy.
             It'll  be  the  first move taught  at  the  Happo
             Dojo, once it's under my management!

TIM:         What's the move?

KUNOU:       Tim,  thou  betrayest  thy  nature  as  a  lower-
             classed  peasant  by  merely thinking  of  asking
             that question.

GRAHAM:      That's right, Timbo.

             [Graham goes back to studying the paper.]

KUNOU:       But...uh,  it  couldst not  hurt  to  educate  my
             dutiful  servant, sensei. Just, han, in  case  it
             ever comes up in his services.

GRAHAM:      Very well...you see that woman over there?

             [He  points across the street. There, we can  see
             Shiratori  Noomy, looking pleased  with  her  pet
             telephone,  while Sanzenin Chris  skates  wearily
             behind her.]

TIM & KUNOU: Hai.

GRAHAM:      Well, watch this! Happo shitagi kusuneru koto!

             [We  cut to Noomy and Chris. Noomy suddenly comes
             to a stop. Her hair ruffles slightly.]

NOOMY:       Chris-kun...

CHRIS:       Hai?

NOOMY:       Did you feel the wind pick up just now?

CHRIS:       Iie.

             [Cut  back to Graham, who is giggling as he holds
             up  his prize: Noomy's bra and pants. Behind him,
             across  the  road,  we see the  figure  of  Noomy
             suddenly pick up speed.]

CHRIS [Off]: Whoa! Where are you going?

NOOMY [Off]: Home! Now Noomy really feels a draft!

             [Graham  giggles again, and looks out of shot  to
             the  others.  He  shrugs, shakes  his  head,  and
             wanders  off  to  enjoy Noomy's  underthings.  We
             then  see  that Kunou has set Tim up against  the
             wall  wearing  a  bra and pants  over  his  ninja
             jumpsuit.  He  has  a pained  expression  on  his
             face.]

TIM:         Kunou-sama...are  you  sure  it  wouldn't  be   a
             better  idea just to ask the sensei to teach  you
             this move?

KUNOU:       Nonsense,  Timothy? You think after all  my  time
             with  that man that I no longer have the  ability
             to   learn   of  my  own?!  Aaa...happi   shitagi
             naninaninani!

             [He  leaps  across at Tim, and in the next  shot,
             he's  struggling with the ladieswear,  trying  to
             prise  it  off  his servant. It's quite  intense.
             After  a few moments, into all this walks  Sayuri
             Kim.]

SAYURI:      [Coughs] Hm.

             [Kunou's head whips around - he sees her.]

SAYURI:      Aaa...konnichiwa, sempai.

             [She backs away slowly, then disappears into  the
             building. Kunou's face turns bright red,  and  he
             passes out.]



             10. DOJO PROPER.

             [Nicole's   face,  somewhat  uncharacteristically
             exhausted-looking, fills the shot.]

NICOLE:      And  there it finishes! The challenger to  defend
             the ownership of the Tendo Dojo has been chosen!

             [We  cut to the other fighters, now lying  in  an
             exhausted heap.]

SUZY [Weak]: Ra.

             [She falls asleep. Dissolve.]



             11. OUTSIDE TENDO DOJO.

             [The  doors  are  now open. It's  another  day  -
             Wednesday,  in  fact.  Yes  -  the  day  of   the
             challenge. Scary.]



             12. DOJO PROPER.

             [Ratbat-chan,  Suzy, Bobbi and Ruthie-sensei  are
             all  sitting around, wearing gis. Fiona  is  also
             present, as are Len and Niki.]

SUZY [to Ratbat]:  I  don't get it. Why's your mother  keeping
             everyone  in  suspense like this?  She  said  she
             knew  who  the  challenger  would  be,  then  she
             didn't tell us who!

RATBAT:      I'm tellin' ye, I still dunno, y'know'at I mean?

RUTHIE:      Maybe  she thinks that we're all just good enough
             anyway.

SUZY:        Huh. Nerf.

BOBBI:       It  could  be  that  she  wants  the  element  of
             surprise  on  our side. But I really  think  that
             that's  supposed  to mean that your  opponent  is
             surprised, not you. That's right, isn't it?

FIONA:       I do believe you're right, Okaasan.

BOBBI:       Yatta! Your mother told you.

FIONA:       Sumimasen,  Okaasan.  You're  only  right   about
             this, not about cracks in the pavement.

BOBBI:       I'm  telling you! I know someone who  stepped  on
             one and she did end up in Canada!

FIONA:       [Almost  imperceptible, dainty little sigh]  Hai,
             Okaasan.

LEN:         Growr.

             [He  holds up a sign saying 'If I was allowed  to
             fight as a human, I'd win easily.']

NIKI:        Ee,  but  if  your  wife saw you  fighting  as  a
             human, she'd make you commit seppuku easily.

LEN:         Hrrag.

             [He  pulls  out a set of false-nose-and-moustache
             glasses  from behind his back and puts  them  on.
             New  sign: 'Hello. I'm Sonoda Kenichi. How do you
             do?'  Niki  groans and buries  her  face  in  her
             hands.]

             [Over   towards  the  edge,  we  see  the  Toboki
             brothers,  Colleen and Charlotte,  who  it  seems
             have  been allowed in to watch their friends  get
             the  crap  kicked  out  of  them.  Charlotte   is
             cuddling  right up to Colleen's arm. Col  doesn't
             seem to appreciate it.]

EUAN:        So, eeto...how was your date last night?

COLLEEN:     We went to the eiga.

CHARLOTTE:   Hai!

CALLUM:      Soone. Any good?

COLLEEN:     Ja...I'm  not really sure if I'd call The  Crying
             Game a 'date' movie. Why did you pick that one?

             [Charlotte  detaches himself for long  enough  to
             stare blankly at Colleen.]

CHARLOTTE:   Why,  Colleen-chan - isn't it obvious?  [Beat]  I
             love films about the IRA!

             [Colleen, Dr Callum and Euan collapse.]

             [Through  the doors, Happousai Graham  and  Kunou
             Jarrah enter, accompanied by a fanfare.]

GRAHAM:      Now! Present occupants of--

             [He can't be heard very well over the fanfare.]

GRAHAM:      Hodjsuke!

             [The music continues.]

KUNOU:       Timothy! Come in here!

             [Tim  enters, and we see that it is he  producing
             the  fanfare music, using a kids' plastic  'play'
             musical instrument.]

	[Side note: While it is usually assumed that the Great
Composers, who wrote all those centuries ago, were penning
work to be played by piano, viola, orchestra, or other
similarly grand methods, it is a little-known fact that they
all actually intended their music to be performed on cheap
plastic noise-makers with brightly-coloured buttons that you
can pick up at Daimaru for 350 yen a pop.]


KUNOU:       Timothy - cease thy playing.

             [He does so.]

TIM:         Hai, Kunou-sama.

             [And  with  that, Kunou walks to the centre,  and
             stands  ready.  A spotlight is on him.  Even  his
             rubber sword is firm, and stands strong.]

GRAHAM:      And  now,  present  - and soon  to  be  former  -
             occupants  of  the Tendo Dojo - have  you  chosen
             your   best   student  to  compete   against   my
             champion, Kunou Jarrah?

             [There is a small pause as everyone wonders  what
             to    do,   immediately   relieved   as   Nicole,
             brandishing her katana, enters through the  other
             door.]

NICOLE:      We have.

             [Graham  is  actually mildly  surprised,  but  he
             tries not to let it show.]

GRAHAM:      You'll put yourself forward against Kunou-san?

NICOLE:      No.  I'm  just  here to make an announcement.  To
             tell  you  whom we have chosen that Kunou  Jarrah
             shall not be able to fight to a standstill.

KUNOU [Subtle mockery]:And who might this be?

             [Nicole flings her katana forward and points.]

NICOLE:      YOU.

             [There  is  silence. Everyone stares  at  Nicole,
             but it's true. She is pointing right at Kunou.]

KUNOU:       Myself?!

NICOLE:      Are  you  not a student of Rejinra? As  the  last
             teaching place of the art - as laid down  by  the
             challenge  -  we  may call upon  any  student  of
             Rejinra martial arts. I challenge you now,  Kunou
             Jarrah - fight yourself to a standstill!

             [He can't, of course (well, maybe he could if  he
             was  really clever, but let's face it, he's not).
             His face screws up and he cries out.]

KUNOU:       AAAARRRGGGGHHHH!!!!  A  pox  on  your  school  of
             martial arts!

             [He  angrily  casts  down his sword  towards  the
             floor.  It  bounces up, rebounds of  the  ceiling
             and  a  few  walls, before bouncing  outside.  We
             hear the splash as it lands in the pond.]

KUNOU:       If  it  is  by  this  trickery that  your  school
             endures,  then  I  will  have  no  part  of   it!
             Timothy! Come!

             [Kunou  storms  out. Tim executes  a  quick  bow,
             accepts a blown kiss from Fiona, and follows.]

GRAHAM:      SSSHHIIIIIIIIITTTTTT!!!!   [To   Nicole]   That's
             cheating!

             [Bobbi, similarly confident now, steps up.]

BOBBI:       It  would  be your own fault, for never declaring
             where   you  taught  Kunou  to  be  an   official
             training ground.

GRAHAM:      Urusai!  Man,  do  I need Guinness  -  about  the
             volume of the Pacific Ocean should do it!

             [Cries  comically and smashes his head repeatedly
             against   the  floor.  The  others  stop   paying
             attention.  There is a short round  of  applause,
             at which Nicole bows.]

NICOLE:      Thank you, thank you.

NIKI:        That was great, Sigmatome-san!

RATBAT:      Aye!!

SUZY:        How did you think of that one?

NICOLE [Humble]:   Ano,  I just, well...[un-humble]  Oh,  what
             the heck! I'm really smart!

             [Laughs,   and   the  hugs  and   congratulations
             continue.]

GRAHAM:      Right! I've had enough!

             [They suddenly remember he's there.]

GRAHAM:      I  might not have won your dojo, but I'm still on
             the  lookout for an heir to carry on my style  of
             Rejinra! There will be another day!!

             [He  is  about to expand on that, then he becomes
             aware  of  his  head  where he  was  smashing  it
             against the floor.]

GRAHAM:      Aaa...aaa...but  I  think  that,  on  that  other
             day...I might have a bit of a headache. But  just
             one more thing before I go!

SUZY:        Oh? And what's that, then?

GRAHAM:      This!

             [He  quickly mutters something under his  breath,
             then   we  cut  to  the  others.  There  is   the
             suggestion of a slight gust of wind, then (as  is
             most evident on Fiona, Nicole and Niki - none  of
             whom  are wearing a gi) the females' breasts  all
             suddenly  droop  somewhat. Fiona  notices  first,
             and looks at herself.]

FIONA:       Oh, my.

             [Graham  holds  up his prize -  several  bits  of
             underwear  -  and laughs his head off.  He  looks
             towards  the  chest  of Bobbi (who  was  standing
             separate from the others), and is about  to  make
             a leap, but:]

GRAHAM:      Oh,  what'll  be the point? Sayonara,  my  pretty
             things...!

             [Laughing  still, he bounds out of the  dojo  and
             away. Everyone watches him go.]

CHARLOTTE:   Strange man.

COLLEEN:     You can talk.

CALLUM:      Oh,  he  can. It's because this part  back  here,
             called the larynx, and--

             [Colleen thumps him with The Big One.]

COLLEEN:     I hate doctors.

             [They  go up to the dojo-dwellers. While  Callum,
             Charlotte  and  Euan  exchange  pleasantries  and
             congratulations with the others, we have  Colleen
             and Ratbat.]

COLLEEN [Whispers]:      That  was  a  clever  move  on   your
             mother's part, Ratchan.

RATBAT [Whispers]:Now ye see where I got it from...

             [Colleen  looks  to  where  Len  is  toying  with
             Graham's discarded Guinness can.]

COLLEEN:     Ja, somehow I already knew where you hadn't...

             [They  laugh.  Ratbat notices  Charlotte  in  the
             mix.]

RATBAT:      'ere, you and Charlotte...?

COLLEEN:     Not me and. Just Charlotte.

RATBAT:      Och. Right.

             [Colleen  stares despite herself  for  a  moment.
             Then,  after  a  second of almost daring  herself
             to,  she quickly leans forward and kisses  Ratbat
             on the cheek.]

COLLEEN [Whisper]:Later, Ratchan...

RATBAT:      Aye...

             [The  Tobokis, and the half-unwilling couple also
             depart,  leaving  the family  to  it  and  waving
             their goodbyes.]

NICOLE:      Hmmm.  Now, I hate to say it, minasan,  but  -  I
             have to leave you too, now.

             [Len,  Bobbi  and Ratbat manage to  fake  looking
             sad reasonably well.]

BOBBI:       Ohhhh. Do you?

NICOLE:      Hai,  hai. I'm quite behind on a lot of things  I
             have  to do back in Hakodate. I've already stayed
             an  extra day because of the challenge. I  really
             should go. Goodbye, everyone. I'm sure I'll  come
             back again some day.

SUZY:        Oh, you needn't rush yourself.

             [Bites  tongue again: It never comes out the  way
             she  means, does it? Fortunately, Nicole  doesn't
             notice.]

FIONA:       Let's  go,  Sigmatome-san - I'll  help  you  with
             your things.

NICOLE:      Oh, thank you.

             [They  leave  the  room, Ratbat  and  Niki  still
             waving  at  Nicole as she goes. The second  she's
             out  of  sight, Len has a kettle in his  hand  (I
             guess  Fiona was doing the tea thing  again,  big
             surprise),  and  douses  himself,  changing  back
             into a human.]

LEN:         Ohhhhhh - thank God she's gone, eh? Now I can  go
             back to doing nice, normal human things!

NIKI:        Eto,  Len...what is it you actually do as a human
             that you can't do when you're a panda?

             [Len  opens his mouth to reply, but says nothing.
             His  mouth still open, he simply turns and  exits
             the room.]

RATBAT:      Och!  And  I can stop having to do that  'proper'
             diction all the time!

SUZY:        [Laughs] When were you planning on starting?

             [Ratbat sticks a finger under her eye and  sticks
             her tongue out at Suzy.]

RATBAT:      Pbbbbbb!

SUZY:        Nerf.

             [Suzy twitches self-consciously.]

SUZY:        You  know  what? I think restoring some  bits  of
             garmentry  might  be an idea, particularly  after
             Happousai's     little...re-appropriation.     No
             underwear and a gi - it's kinda uncomfortable.

RATBAT:      Aye...I know'at ye mean...

             [All  three start off, Ratbat in front. Niki also
             twitches, feeling this manner of apparel.]

NIKI:        Oh, I don't know - I think I...kinda like it.

SUZY:        [Heavy sigh] Niki - you're a worry.

NIKI:        I  know  -  [play-lustful smile] and you wouldn't
             have me any other way...

             [They  both  giggle  at each other  while  Ratbat
             just slaps her forehead into her palm.]



             END CREDITS.

             [With the alternative version of Equal Romance.]

                          Tendo Suzy
                          SUZY STYLES
                               
                       Sigmatome Ratbat
                          URAC SIGMA
                               
                          Tendo Niki
                         NIKI O'BRIEN
                               
                       Kurenai Charlotte
                       CHARLOTTE SAROSSY
                               
                        Kuonji Colleen
                         COLLEEN HICK
                               
                       Happousai Graham
                        GRAHAM HENSTOCK
                               
                          Tendo Bobbi
                         ROBYN SCHOLES 
                               
                       Hodjsuke Timothy
                           TIM HODGE
                               
                       Sigmatome Nicole
                         NICOLE WYLIE 
                               
                       Dr Toboki Callum
                         CALLUM BOWEN
                               
                          Toboki Euan
                          EUAN BOWEN 
                               
                         Ruthie-sensei
                          RUTH CRABB
                               
                        Sanzenin Chris
                         CHRIS SIMPSON
                               
                        Shiratori Noomy
                      NOOMY SCHWINGHAMER 
                               
                               
                          written by
                          URAC SIGMA
                             with
                          SUZY STYLES
                               
                   creation and development
                          URAC SIGMA
                          SUZY STYLES
                          EUAN BOWEN
                         LEILA FETTER
                               
                       with apologies to
                       TAKAHASHI RUMIKO
                       (amongst others)
                               
    http://www.geocities.com/Hollywood/1778/bundahalf.html
                               
                               
                               
             13. FRONT ROOM, KUNOU MANOR.

             [Kunou and Tim enter. Kunou is still more than  a
             little annoyed.]

KUNOU:       Why  did I ever listen to that man, Timothy?  The
             last  week and a half has merely been a week  and
             a  half  stolen  from my pursuit  of  the  lovely
             Tendo  Suzy  and the fair ponīteru no  onna,  and
             from  my  quest to free them both from that  used
             sanitary napkin Sigmatome Ratbat.

             [As  Tim  moves  through to another  room,  Kunou
             sinks onto a sofa.]

KUNOU:       Will no good news befall me in this age?

             [Tim returns to the room.]

TIM:         Aaaaa...possibly not, Kunou-sama.

KUNOU:       What meanst thou?

TIM:         I  just  checked the answering machine,  sir.  It
             seems  that  despite  her  original  plans,  your
             sister  will  be  returning to Tokyo  later  this
             year.

             [Kunou's  face darkens, and he leans forward  and
             buries  it in his hands. After a few moments,  he
             lifts  his head, and looks towards his weapon  on
             another chair.]

KUNOU:       I  wonder  if  one  can commit  harakiri  with  a
             rubber sword?

             [Freeze.  And there ends Volume II of Narrabundah
             1/2.  Huge  thanks to everyone who's been  watching
             and  reading. The saga will continue  later  this
             year,  though - in Narrabundah 1/2 - Movie I! Until
             then, viewers, mata ne, and thanks again!]
                               
                (c) Recycadelic Cacti MCMXCVII

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