Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF][R1/2]Nabiki-New Horizons - Pt 8 (Draft)
From: databank@mindspring.com (Zen)
Date: 5/1/1997, 4:05 PM
To: "G.L. Sandborn" <sandborn@microlink.net>, fanfic@fanfic.com

Hiya Greg...

Just a quick note...

Zen was taking the time to re-read NNH part 8 again....

Ghoddess, Zen is glad to have a copy. ^_^

Zen really needed a good laugh, and this one is full of them.

The exchanges between Kasumi and Suzuki-san were *priceless*

(As were Kasumi's constant admonitions to her mother... <stop laughing...>
Bwaaaaaahhh ha ha ha ha ha!)

The bit with Ranma, Akane and 'Poo was also hystrical.

It will be very interesting to see ehat happens as a policeman starts to
hang out near the Tendous more... very interesting indeed.


Anyway, the characterizations were particularly good -

and at the beginning Zen was just waiting for the announcement - "And now,
for your in-flight entertainment, William Shatner in "Nightmare at 20,000
feet..."  ^_^



Zen only found one flaw in the whole piece.

    "Saotome!" Genma yelled from the hallway.  "Subtle, you're not."
he added as Genma quickly caught up with him.

Zen thinks that it was prolly Soun yelling from the hallway... ^_^


Looking forward to part nine! ^_^

Zen no Itan-sha