I still think your story could be served
better by a more balanced portrayl of Akane, especially considering the
wonderful depth you've given to the other characters.

Yeah, I've been rather harsh on Akane, haven't I? I've gotten quite a
number of complaints about my treatment of her, so maybe I'll have to do
something about it <ideas begin quagulating in Ryan's brain... not that
this is nessisarily a good thing...> ;)

Hey, man, Akane sucks.  Although I guess I have to agree here.  A "more balanced 
portrayal" of Akane may actually be a good thing...as long as you don't follow 
the most traveled path and bring her and Ranma back together.


                                JOHN HARDING


Likes Ranma �    Hates Akane Tendo   Wants Shampoo


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