Subject: Re: [FFML] [ranma]Purple Haired Destiny Chapter 2!
From: Ryan Anderson
Date: 5/6/1997, 4:48 PM
To: heretic@jhunix.hcf.jhu.edu (H. Torrance Griffin)
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com


	I dunno... Nodoka comes off here as more than a tad... nuts?

hmm... you think so? I didn't intend for her to appear crazy, just a
little too traditional/prideful.

	Ranma seems a little forgiving towards Ukyo... I mean I see how
his relationship with 'Poo has improved but his Old Buddy Ucchan has only
_just_ ruined his life.

yeah well, we'll just have to wait for the next chapter to see how long
that lasts... Remember though, she _is_ his best friend, even if she did
hurt him very badly, a shock like he just went through woul probably have
him looking for any shoulder to lean on... However, he hasn't completely
forgiven either of them yet...

	Genma must die, period.

;) That willy old bastard is fairly difficult to kill though...

	One other thing, the original deal was that Ranma wed _a_ Tendo
sibling.  There are two perfectly fertile and unattached young women still
in the Dojo for Nodoka to draft....

:( I know, I know... Its kinda  plot hole I forgot about, and I'll have to
do something to patch it up in the next chapter.


	Overall: Good Work.

Thanks!

Ryan