Bravo!  A very nice extrapolation of the characters and a convincing blend
of canon and extrapolation... in my not particularly humble opinion. ^_^

Some of the comments, so far, make me wonder if their writers understand the
story. For example:

I still think your story could be served
better by a more balanced portrayl of Akane, especially considering the
wonderful depth you've given to the other characters.

I don't think you should take this one too much to heart. Akane's distrust
of Ranma and total rejection of him may seem extreme to some, but consider
that her distrust of Ranma has been shown again and in the canon story. So
far as I know, she hasn't actually seen Ranma *kissing* any other girl in
the canon story line. She normally only sees Ranma being hugged which sends
her into a rage. If this is indeed the first 'kiss' she's seen, I don't
think it's a very big stretch to believe she would react the way she has in
this story.

Actually, Azuza kissed Ranma during the Martial Arts Ice Skating fight.

Just ran across that in research earlier today.

Oh, and as regards my opinion of PHD...

...don't regard them. I -have- a flamewar going already. }:-{/

Redneck (realism, feh, next we'll have the Three Stooges in a fanfic getting
arrested for assault and battery)

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