Subject: Re: [FFML] [ff][Reunion] Shampoo's Story
From: bridget ellen engman
Date: 5/9/1997, 11:20 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Sat, 10 May 1997, Gary Kleppe wrote:

On Fri, 9 May 1997 16:50:01 -0500 (CDT), Bridget Ellen Engman wrote:

Ranma 1/2 Reunion
Shampoo:  Feet of Clay, Kisses of Death

Very good... a very nasty take on Cologne's character, but one that works for
your story. My one suggestion: Mousse, I think, changed his behavior a little
too easily. It's fine for him to do what he did, but it must have been terribly
hard for him to turn against Shampoo, and I'd like to see this shown a little
more.


Thought that might be the case, actually; the Mousse scenes were the ones 
written this morning :P  Expect some expansion there and in the M-S fight 
scene (like the story needs to be any longer :))
 
I'm not totally convinced that that wasn't just a duck at the end, BTW...

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Of course it was Mousse!  What, you think we're going to pull a cheap 
trick like bringing him back for the reunion?... hey, waitaminute...

:)
bengman