C&C needed. Not sure how to procede.

"CHARLOTTE AND AZUSA" 
(A Ranma 1/2 Spec-fic that answers the question: What if the Golden Pair had
won the Charlotte Cup?)
 
 
Azusa brought her new pet into her room and put the 'cute' little pig in his
new bed and covered him with a blanket. "Good night, Charlotte." She told 
him as she gave him an almost motherly kiss.
 
The next morning, Azusa brought Charlotte in for a bath. Naturally, the
little pig started struggling. Azusa suddenly brought out her mallet and
hit the struggling pig over the head knocking him out.
 
"You're gonne be so cute!" She told the little pig as she emersed him in
the hot water.
 
The change happened in seconds, Azusa gasping as the little black piggy
transformed into the handsome boy she'd seen at the rink. Azusa blinked
and then grinned, broadly. "Oooooh! you're so cute!!!" She took in every
bit of him as lie there in the tub: eyes, nose, mouth, chest, abdomen... 
"Hmmmm... I guess I can't call you Charlotte, can I?" She giggled. "That
would be a silly name for a boy." Untaught the ways of world, Azusa was
not embarrassed about touching him since it was totally innocent and she
was only bathing him.
 
Ryoga woke and pushed Azusa's hand away. "How *DARE* you take advantage of 
me!" He cried out. "I was saving myself and now I'm ruined! Ruined! I wanted
to marry Akane and now... I can't give myself to her! How could you defile 
me in such a manner?!"