Thank you for your c&c, Gary..  I'm glad you enjoyed.  It began 
as I sat before my keyboard listening to an Enya CD (The Celts), when a low 
voice whispered in my ear "Tell _my_ story".  I looked up and there was Queen 
Boadicea holding a bonbori.  Inspiration struck.  *****
	The story is for two purposes, the other one is to use Shampoo to 
explore the area between loyalty and logic.  Shampoo is an Amazon, no 
changing that.  Her village has been locked into a final set of orders 
from the last Queen for 2000 years.  It is static.  Shampoo has been 
exposed to new ideas, new concepts.  How will she handle her realization 
of the difference she was raised to accept unquestioningly and her 
growing comprehension that there is something wrong with it?  As I've 
mentioned privately to Torrance Griffin, I have no intention of taking up 
Shampoo's love life except as it may bear on the other question.
	I have no intention of exploring the implications of the Amazon 
use of magic, Jusenkyo, or their gods.  If you or anyone else wishes to 
use this background material, please feel free to do so. ^_^  My blessings.
	I have picked the nits you pointed out - well, all but one.  
Basically I just can't spell. V_V  Arigatou goziamasu for pointing them 
out.  You are a good C&C'er, sir.  The one suggestion you've made that I 
just _can't_ handle is to change the last line to "Maybe Shampoo marry 
Tsubasa"..  EEEEEEeeeeeEEEEEEeeeekkkkkkk.  O_o;;;

S h a z o r n				No, I'm not an otaku!
<rayburn@cc.umanitoba.ca>		But I'm working on it... ^_^;