Kun-chan is back. Oh happy day. I'll leave the detailed C&C to others,
but here are a few minor comments and questions.
Wouldn't it make more sense for Ranma to consider describing "Ranko" as a
Tendo cousin? It is not unlikely that one of those other mothers would
eventually find out that there are three Tendo sisters and none of them are
named "Ranko". A favorite female cousin of the same age looking after a
child is not that uncommon a situation in countries with strong family
structures.
As soon as I read that Akane had a boy and Ukyo had a girl, I figured
that the fathers would get around to engaging them, but that scene and the
aftermath were still funny to read.
Will there be some way for Hinak-sensei to stay in adult form long enough
so that some future partner won't feel like a pedophile? Perhaps Kodachi
can develop something.
If the others find out about what Mikado and Kodachi do in their spare
time, I don't think any local restaurant will ever again serve them any
drink with ice.
Good story.
dml