Ryan Anderson wrote:

A very nice story! finnally, Ukyo gets some of the credit she
deserves..
I'mso *tired* of Ranma and Akane fics!!!! god, but those tow as such
an
awful couple... I was also gald to see that you didn't have Shampoo
portrayed too badly, something I always look for in a fic.

Gee, then you wouldn't have liked my first draft that had all the bad
stuff about Shampoo in it...

This was a story that really would have turned out better if written
in story form instead of Script, as the insight into the characters
allowed by story -format would be better able
to convege the emotion of the characters. an intresting story though.

I thought so too, I was thinking about rewriting it in story form so I
could pay more attention to details, but alas, I will only have 4 days
off this month from working at the mental hospital to do something like
that, maybe later this summer...

Still, I think shampoo would make the better match. but then I'm bais.
;)

Well I'm bias too ;)

ryan
the last, great defender of the Purple Haired Goddess and Ranma
matchup.

  Ryan
Still a strong follower of the Church of Ucchan and defender against the
hordes of Shampoo lovers