On Mon, 16 Jun 1997 01:00:32 -0700, turbo@relex.com wrote:
I Know
A Ranma 1/2 Fanfic
by turbo
Interesting. Kind of takes the idea of "She Knows?" and goes one step
farther. Seeing the same scene through the eyes of all the different
characters is a cool idea.
The dialog needs work, IMO. Akane didn't sound much like herself to me
when she spoke in this. It's not what she said, but the way in which she
said it.
Gary Kleppe
kleppe@execpc.com, Home page http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe
My fanfics and the FFML map are on my comics/manga page,
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics