*sigh*

This ML is messed up! I'm not getting half the stuff I should be getting.
I don't even remember seeing my post to the ML, and yet it seems that
someone has replied! I only seem to get private mail properly. *sigh*
Stupid thing...

Thanks, Kergma, for sending this again ... So if you people want to make
comments, send them to me directly...? Or at least have my name in the
Cc like Kergma has, please. (Except, use 'caseawr@ecr.mu.oz.au' instead
of the kunoichi address, if you do.)

I wonder if I'll even see if THIS reply gets to the ML! -_-

If anyone has seen/saved any other comments about my fic on the ML, please
e-mail them to me?

  Kun-chan is back.  Oh happy day.  I'll leave the detailed C&C to others,
but here are a few minor comments and questions. 

;p

  Wouldn't it make more sense for Ranma to consider describing "Ranko" as a
Tendo cousin?  It is not unlikely that one of those other mothers would
eventually find out that there are three Tendo sisters and none of them are
named "Ranko".  A favorite female cousin of the same age looking after a
child is not that uncommon a situation in countries with strong family
structures.

Yep, thanks ... no-one else picked that one up! I was meant to type in
'cousin' but somehow it came out 'sister'... guess that's what happens
when you type fics at night time, ne!

  As soon as I read that Akane had a boy and Ukyo had a girl, I figured
that the fathers would get around to engaging them, but that scene and the
aftermath were still funny to read.

^_^

  Will there be some way for Hinak-sensei to stay in adult form long enough
so that some future partner won't feel like a pedophile?  Perhaps Kodachi
can develop something.  

You'll have to wait and see! *smirk*

  If the others find out about what Mikado and Kodachi do in their spare
time, I don't think any local restaurant will ever again serve them any
drink with ice.  

Teehee.

  Good story.  

Thank you!

Kun-chan...
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