Tenchi Wars

                     Episode XIV: A New Hope

	I won't ask.

 >               During the battle, Juraian

              spies managed to steal
              plans to the Empire's
              ultimate weapon, the Tsunami,
              a massive battleship with
              enough power to destroy
              an entire planet.

	I would imagine you would like to keep a little bit of the Good/Evil
clash here. Why not change the Tsunami to the Souya?

      Aboard the Ryu-Oh, the crew took position and waited, weapons

at

the ready.  There was a hiss, and a bulkhead blew open, allowing

the

platoon of enemy soldiers in.  The fighting was fierce, many
falling--but the invaders pressed forward, inexorably.  In their

wake

stepped Lord Kagato, servant to the Empress Tokimi.  As the

invading

soldiers spread out through the ship, they searched for the

Princess

Aeka, to take her back to Kagato.  

	You, by no means have to listen to me, but along the same lines as
above, it has never been completely deemed that Tokimi is evil.  Why
not change who the Emperor is.. someone who is more commonly referred
to as evil, like ... I dunno, Clay or something. (Or maybe Azuza..
:))
 

      Shaking in his boots, literally, the man said, "This is a
counselor ship on a mission to Jurai.... we received no
transmissions..."  

	Thats strange ... Katago didn't ask for Transmissions, he asked for
plans.

      Kamidake had managed to lose Azaka, and came upon the

Princess.

She smiled, and, in the smoke-filled corridor, fed him a special
programming chip.  With a whisper, she sent him back to Azaka, then
hid, hearing the goosesteps of an approaching squad.

	While I'm here, I might as well say that plans don't really work for
Tsunami.  I mean ... Plans for a Tree?? How about something really
dangerous to Tsunami, like maybe Ryouko's gems?
 

      Kagato sounded furious. "You are part of the Rebel Alliance

and

a traitor. TAKE HER AWAY!" 

	I know what you said about it being just a port from the actual Star
Wars script, but how about changing the planet names as well as the
character names. Earth instead of Tantooine, Jurai instead of
Alderaan or maybe Yavin, or even Courscant.

      "Holding her is dangerous. If word leaks out, it could

generate

sympathy for the Rebellion."  Zero struggled to stay abreast of
Kagato.

	Zero? A lowley commander? Nah. Try Boba Fett! :)

      Several things happened at this point.  Ryouko greeted Tenchi

with a

big, warm, soft, fluffy hug.  (If you don't think a hug can be

fluffy..

well. :)  The newly awoken Guardians gasped.  "Space Pirate

Ryouko!!" 

Azaka swiveled to face Kamidake.  "Is it really her?"

	EEEP! Good-bye Star Wars.

	THis is actually a very good job at mixing the Tenchi Muyo and Star
Wars universes. I await the next part, see how you handle this
situation.

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