| Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic][P:Ako] Renewed Acquaintances - Part 4 - Convergance |
| From: "H. Torrance Griffin" <heretic@jhunix.hcf.jhu.edu> |
| Date: 7/4/1997, 10:29 AM |
| To: Coutuva |
| CC: FFML <fanfic@fanfic.com> |
_Excellent_ work so far, but Eiko's actions in the last chapter
and this make her come off as not only paranoid but heartless as well (D
could have worked on her delivery, but to refuse contact with her best
friend is a Bit Cold)
HTG